School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，句子不完整。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免断断续续，使用正确的语法结构。

예시: My school is located in Jinan, which is in the western part of Shandong Province.

제안: 回答过于消极且表达不完整，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议表达观点时保持礼貌，使用完整句子，并提供具体原因。

예시: I don't like my school very much because the administration is not very efficient, and the infrastructure is inconvenient. Also, some teachers are not very supportive.

제안: 回答较为完整，但语法和表达有误，且缺少连接词。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并注意语法正确。

예시: No, I don't think my school is a good place to study because the weather is very hot, and many classrooms do not have air conditioning. Therefore, studying in the classroom or library can be uncomfortable and make us sweaty.

제안: 回答内容具体，但语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和时态，表达更自然流畅。

예시: Well, my school has a big lake surrounded by trees, and a mountain is reflected on the lake. It's really beautiful, but most of the time I don't feel like appreciating it.

제안: 回答表达不完整且语法错误较多，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I think interest plays a key role in studying because if you are not interested in a subject, you will lack motivation to learn it, which makes the process very difficult. As a result, you may not learn it well.

× My school is. In a city called Jinan, where it's a. West of Shandong Province.

✓ My school is in a city called Jinan, which is in the west of Shandong Province.

原句句子结构不完整，断句错误，导致表达不清晰。应将分散的句子合并成完整句子，使用关系代词"which"引导定语从句，明确地点关系。

× I really hate my school. Because it had poor administration.

✓ I really hate my school because it has poor administration.

句中表达现在的感受和现状，动词时态应使用现在时，原句使用了过去时"had"，与语境不符。

× And. The inconvenient infrastructure.

✓ And the infrastructure is inconvenient.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语动词"is"，使句子完整。

× And the teacher here is really.

✓ And the teachers here are really bad.

原句不完整，缺少形容词或补语，且"teacher"应为复数"teachers"，与后文形容词搭配。

× a lot of classroom have no air condition.

✓ a lot of classrooms have no air conditioning.

"classroom"应为复数"classrooms"，且"air condition"应为"air conditioning"，表示空调设备。

× So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

✓ So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

"sweaty"是形容词，描述人的状态，使用正确，无需修改。

× And it really uncomfortable for us.

✓ And it is really uncomfortable for us.

缺少系动词"is"，导致句子不完整，应补充。

× Well, my school have a big lake surrounded by the trees and a mountain reflect on the lake.

✓ Well, my school has a big lake surrounded by trees and a mountain reflecting on the lake.

"school"为单数，谓语动词应为"has"，"the trees"改为复数无冠词"trees"更自然，"reflect"应为现在分词"reflecting"修饰"mountain"。

× But most of time I have no mood to appreciate them.

✓ But most of the time I have no mood to appreciate them.

缺少定冠词"the"，且"most of the time"为固定表达。

× I think interest play a key role on study because when you have no interest on some subject, you will be no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

✓ I think interest plays a key role in study because when you have no interest in some subjects, you will have no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

"interest"为单数，谓语动词应为"plays"，介词应为"in study"和"interest in some subjects"，"subject"应为复数。

× So if you can't learn it well.

✓ So if you can't learn it well, it will be difficult.

原句为不完整句，缺少主句，需补充完整表达。