School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“my school have”应为“my school has”，并且句子应更连贯自然。可以将信息整合，避免断句过短，提升表达流畅度。

예시: My school is located in Jinan, a city in the west of Shandong Province. I major in Urban Planning at the Architecture College. Although the campus has beautiful scenery, I rarely have time to enjoy it.

제안: 回答中断句不连贯，且表达过于负面且缺乏具体细节。建议用更自然的表达方式，提供具体例子支持观点，同时避免过于情绪化的词汇。

예시: To be honest, I'm not very satisfied with my university because the facilities are outdated and the administration could be improved. For example, some teachers seem less approachable, which affects the learning experience.

제안: 回答中语法和句子结构有误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体描述环境对学习的影响。

예시: Not at all. Most classrooms and the library lack air conditioning, so they are very cold in winter and extremely hot in summer, which makes it difficult to concentrate on studying.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的单复数形式和更准确的词汇，同时使句子更连贯。

예시: The environment at my school is quite beautiful. There is a big lake surrounded by various kinds of trees, and sometimes we can see some rare animals nearby.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议用更地道的表达方式，清晰说明兴趣对学习的重要性，并避免语法错误。

예시: I think interest is very important in studying because without it, learning becomes difficult and frustrating, which can affect your performance.

× My school have beautiful scenery, but I always have no time to enjoy them.

✓ My school has beautiful scenery, but I always have no time to enjoy it.

主语是单数名词“school”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”。“scenery”是不可数名词，指风景，后面用“it”指代，而不是复数代词“them”。

× I majored the urban Planning in the Architecture college.

✓ I majored in Urban Planning in the Architecture college.

动词“major”后应接介词“in”表示主修某专业，且“Urban Planning”作为专业名称首字母应大写。

× It is because our university has. An outdated facility and. Terrible administration.

✓ It is because our university has outdated facilities and terrible administration.

“facility”应使用复数形式“facilities”，因为通常指多个设施。句中不应有句号断开，应连贯表达。

× They just consider student as a cash cow, not an independent.

✓ They just consider students as cash cows, not as independent individuals.

“student”应为复数“students”，且“cash cow”也应复数“cash cows”。“independent”应为名词形式“independent individuals”以表达完整意思。

× most of the classroom and the library have no air condition that make.

✓ Most of the classrooms and the library have no air conditioning, which makes

“classroom”应为复数“classrooms”，且“air condition”应为“air conditioning”，表示空调。

× that make. It makes that in the winter.

✓ which makes it that in the winter,

关系代词“which”引导定语从句，谓语动词应与先行词“air conditioning”单数一致，故用“makes”。

× Well, the scenery in our school is quite beautiful, but I have no time to enjoy them.

✓ Well, the scenery in our school is quite beautiful, but I have no time to enjoy it.

“scenery”是不可数名词，指风景，后面用单数代词“it”指代，而不是复数代词“them”。

× There are a. Big lake and different kinds of trees surrounding them by it.

✓ There is a big lake and different kinds of trees surrounding it.

“lake”是单数，故谓语用“is”。“surrounding them by it”表达不当，应为“surrounding it”，指代“lake”。

× And sometime we can see some rare and some another animal.

✓ And sometimes we can see some rare and other animals.

“sometime”应为副词“sometimes”。“animal”应为复数“animals”，且“some another”表达错误，应改为“other”。

× Because if you have no interest, you will be painful to study them and.

✓ Because if you have no interest, you will find studying painful, and

“painful”是形容词，不能直接修饰动词，应用“find studying painful”表达“觉得学习痛苦”。“them”指代不明，应去掉。

× and. So that you can't study well and you will feel frustrated.

✓ so you can't study well and you will feel frustrated.

“and. So that”连接不当，应改为“so”表示因果关系，句子更通顺。