School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“in different city”应为“in a different city”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: My school is in a different city called Taichung, so I live in the dormitory during the week. I enjoy exploring the city on weekends because it has many night markets and cultural sites.

제안: 回答较长且有些冗余，句子结构不够清晰。建议分句表达，使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意语法准确。

예시: To be honest, I like my school because it offers a variety of courses. Moreover, the teachers are very supportive and encourage us. I have also made many friends there.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“There's a big drawback is that”不正确。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的句型。

예시: Unfortunately, I don't think my school is a good place to study because it doesn't have a library. Therefore, I usually study at a coffee shop or at home.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“the atmosphere there are well done”不正确。建议使用正确的主谓一致和更自然的表达方式。

예시: The environment at my school is positive and supportive because the teachers encourage and help us. Overall, the atmosphere is very good.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“motivate it and engaged oneself”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，使表达更流畅。

예시: I think interest in study is extremely important because it motivates us to learn. If we like a subject, we can remember the material better and understand the course more deeply.

× My school is in different city, it's in Taichung and so I live in the dormitory.

✓ My school is in a different city, it's in Taichung and so I live in the dormitory.

这里的“different city”缺少冠词“a”，因为“city”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× I enjoy exploring new city on weekends because there are many night markets and some cultural sites.

✓ I enjoy exploring the new city on weekends because there are many night markets and some cultural sites.

“new city”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指的城市。

× To be honest, yes, there are a variety of courses which I can offer and teachers there are very supportive and are willing to give us encouragement and I make lots of friends there, so I like my school.

✓ To be honest, yes, there are a variety of courses which I can take and teachers there are very supportive and are willing to give us encouragement and I make lots of friends there, so I like my school.

“courses which I can offer”中“offer”用错了，学生应是“take”课程，而不是“offer”课程。

× Unfortunately, no. There's a big drawback is that they don't even have a library, so I can't study by myself.

✓ Unfortunately, no. The big drawback is that they don't even have a library, so I can't study by myself.

“There's a big drawback is that”结构重复，“There is”和“is”不能同时出现，应改为“The big drawback is that”。

× There's I'll go to coffee shop or stay at home to study my work.

✓ Then I'll go to a coffee shop or stay at home to study my work.

“There's I'll go”结构错误，应使用“Then”表示接下来的动作；“coffee shop”前缺少冠词“a”。

× The environment at my school is quite positive and supportive because teachers are willing to encourage us and help us, so I think the atmosphere there are well done.

✓ The environment at my school is quite positive and supportive because teachers are willing to encourage us and help us, so I think the atmosphere there is well done.

“the atmosphere”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，而不是“are”。

× I think this is extremely important because it can motivate it and engaged oneself.

✓ I think this is extremely important because it can motivate us and engage oneself.

“motivate it”中的“it”指代不明，应改为“us”；“engaged”时态错误，应为动词原形“engage”。

× Like if we like a subject, we can remember it and really manage to know the courses and understand it better.

✓ Like if we like a subject, we can remember it and really manage to know the course and understand it better.

“the courses”应与前文“a subject”对应，使用单数“the course”。