School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，且句子不完整。建议简化表达，避免重复，并确保句子完整。

예시: My school is in Hunan province, located in the southern part of China. The weather there is hot and humid in summer, which I find uncomfortable, but I still like living there.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，句子结构混乱。建议使用简洁明了的句子，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I love my school because the teachers are very responsible and prepare well for their classes. They always help me when I have questions, so I have made significant progress.

제안: 回答较好，但存在重复和语法错误。建议注意句子流畅性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think my school is a great place to study because the teachers are responsible, and the classrooms are spacious and quiet. Moreover, every classroom has an air conditioner, which makes studying more comfortable.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，部分词汇使用不当。建议使用准确词汇，句子完整，并且逻辑清晰。

예시: The environment at my school is tidy and neat. Many buildings are surrounded by trees, and after class, some students like to walk around. I think it is a peaceful and harmonious place.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意语法准确性，使用恰当词汇，并丰富细节。

예시: I think interest is very important in studying because it motivates students to keep going even when they face difficulties. For example, if someone is passionate about their subjects, they will see challenges as chances to improve their skills.

× My school is in Hunan province which locates in the southern S part of China.

✓ My school is in Hunan province, which is located in the southern part of China.

句中“which locates in”用法错误，应该用被动语态“which is located in”表示“位于”。“locate”作为及物动词，需有宾语，且此处应使用被动形式。

× Every time I go out I feel. I feel it makes me sweaty but I like.

✓ Every time I go out, I feel hot and sweaty, but I like it.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清。应补充完整表达，明确“feel”后接的内容。

× Yes, I love the schools because I think the teachers in my school are uh are full of responsibilities and they prepare well for their classes and I can learn a lot from them.

✓ Yes, I love the school because I think the teachers in my school are full of responsibility and they prepare well for their classes, and I can learn a lot from them.

“schools”应为单数“school”，因为指的是自己的学校。且“responsibilities”应为不可数名词“responsibility”，表示责任感。

× Whenever I go to visit my teacher, my tutor should like to help me without with her efforts and I make I have made significant.

✓ Whenever I visit my teacher, my tutor is willing to help me with her efforts, and I have made significant progress.

“go to visit”冗余，直接用“visit”即可。“should like to”用法错误，应为“is willing to”。“without with”重复错误，应为“with”。句尾不完整，补充“progress”使句子完整。

× Yes, I think it is a good, it is a really good place for study because all the teachers are responsible for for us and the classrooms are spacious and quiet enough to for us to study it.

✓ Yes, I think it is a really good place to study because all the teachers are responsible for us, and the classrooms are spacious and quiet enough for us to study in.

“place for study”应为“place to study”。“responsible for for us”重复，应为“responsible for us”。“quiet enough to for us to study it”结构混乱，应为“quiet enough for us to study in”。

× What's more, every classroom has an air conditioner.

✓ What's more, every classroom has an air conditioner.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× It is really tidy and neat. What's more, the May buildings were surrounded by a lot of trees and there are some facts wandering around when the class is over and I think it is a harmonious.

✓ It is really tidy and neat. What's more, the main buildings are surrounded by a lot of trees, and there are some cats wandering around when the class is over. I think it is harmonious.

“May buildings”应为“main buildings”。“were surrounded”时态不当，应为现在时“are surrounded”。“facts”应为“cats”。“a harmonious”缺少名词，改为“harmonious”形容词修饰整体环境。

× I think interest is the most important thing since studying because it motivates students to going on even facing difficulties.

✓ I think interest is the most important thing in studying because it motivates students to go on even when facing difficulties.

“since studying”应为“in studying”。“to going on”错误，动词不定式后应接动词原形“to go on”。“even facing difficulties”缺少连词，应为“even when facing difficulties”。

× For example, if someone is passionate about their measures, they will consider the difficulties as opportunities to get progress in their studies.

✓ For example, if someone is passionate about their majors, they will consider the difficulties as opportunities to make progress in their studies.

“measures”应为“majors”，表示专业。动词搭配应为“make progress”而非“get progress”。