School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu sugiru to omoimasu. Motto shizen de, chokusetsu kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, "My school is Tokyo University of Foreign Studies, located on the outskirts of Tokyo. It takes me more than an hour to get there from my home." to iu fuu ni, jisho teki na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na bunpou wa hitsuyou nai node, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba de kotaeru you ni shite kudasai.

예시: My school is Tokyo University of Foreign Studies, located on the outskirts of Tokyo. It takes me more than an hour to get there from my home by train.

제안: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, bun no tsuzuki ga wakari nikui desu. Motto shizen na eigo de, chokusetsu kotaete, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, "Yes, I like my school. This is my first year, and I have made many friends from different countries." to iu fuu ni, kantan de wakariyasui kotoba de kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu.

예시: Yes, I like my school. This is my first year, and I have made many friends from different countries.

제안: Kotae wa yoku kangaerarete imasu ga, bun no tsuzuki ya imi ga sukoshi muzukashii desu. Motto rikai shi yasui you ni, riron to jissai no keiken o setsumei suru toki wa, rensetsu kotoba o tsukatte, bun no nagasa mo 3-5 bunshou ni shimeru to yoi desu. Tatoeba, "Yes, I think my school is a good place to study. At first, I was not interested in my major, linguistics, but because my friends were hardworking, I became interested too." to iu fuu ni.

예시: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study. At first, I was not interested in my major, linguistics, but because my friends were hardworking, I became interested too.

제안: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to eigo no tsuzuki ga sukoshi fukanzen desu. Motto shizen na eigo de, rensetsu kotoba o tsukatte, jikan no junban mo tadashiku shite kudasai. Tatoeba, "My school has a good environment because all students are hardworking. For example, two weeks before tests, many students study in the university lounge." to iu fuu ni kotaeru to yoi desu.

예시: My school has a good environment because all students are hardworking. For example, two weeks before tests, many students study in the university lounge.

제안: Kotae wa imi wa wakarimasu ga, bun no nagasa ga tarinai to omoimasu. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui kotoba de, rensetsu kotoba o tsukatte, bun o kansei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, "I think interest is very important in studying. For example, I found linguistics difficult before I became interested in it." to iu fuu ni kotaeru to yoi desu.

예시: I think interest is very important in studying. For example, I found linguistics difficult before I became interested in it.

× I go to University University called Tokyo University of Foreign Studies, which is located the at the edge of Tokyo, Tokyo.

✓ I go to a university called Tokyo University of Foreign Studies, which is located at the edge of Tokyo.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'University University' and misplaces the article and preposition. 'University' should be preceded by an article 'a' to indicate one university. Also, 'located the at the edge' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'located at the edge'. This correction fixes the article and preposition usage, which relates to 'There be issue' as it involves existence and location expressions.

× The station is called Huchu, which is really far from my home.

✓ The station is called Huchu, which is really far from my home.

This sentence is grammatically correct in terms of preposition usage; 'far from' is appropriate here. No correction needed.

× It takes more than.

✓ It takes more than an hour.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'more than'. To be grammatically correct and meaningful, it should specify what it takes more than, such as 'an hour'. This is a sentence structure error due to incomplete information.

× Yes, I like my school, this is my first year attending the university but although now is the beginning of the school year but I got many friends from many international like in global.

✓ Yes, I like my school. This is my first year attending the university, and although it is the beginning of the school year, I have made many friends from many countries around the world.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions 'but' and 'although' together, causing confusion. Also, 'got many friends from many international like in global' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction separates ideas into clearer sentences, uses appropriate conjunctions, and clarifies the meaning. This addresses incorrect conjunction use and sentence structure errors.

× Yes, I think that my school is really a good place to study. I'm currently majoring in linguistics or Japanese, but at the beginning of the year I wasn't totally interested in the major.

✓ Yes, I think that my school is really a good place to study. I'm currently majoring in linguistics or Japanese, but at the beginning of the year I was not totally interested in the major.

The phrase 'wasn't' is a contraction of 'was not' and is acceptable in spoken English. However, for clarity and formality, expanding it is better. The tense usage is correct here, so no major correction is needed. This is more about style than grammar.

× However, my friends were all diligent and hardworking, so their circumstance was really good that I got interested in the major.

✓ However, my friends were all diligent and hardworking, so their environment was really good, and I became interested in the major.

'Their circumstance was really good' is awkward; 'environment' fits better. Also, 'I got interested' is less formal than 'I became interested'. The sentence also needs a conjunction to connect ideas properly. This corrects pronoun reference and sentence structure.

× So as I said before, my school is really a good place to study and every student is hardworking so that before 2 weeks the test, two weeks before the test everyone is studying at the lounge of at the university.

✓ So as I said before, my school is really a good place to study and every student is hardworking, so two weeks before the test, everyone studies in the university lounge.

The phrase 'before 2 weeks the test' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'two weeks before the test'. Also, 'studying at the lounge of at the university' is awkward; 'studies in the university lounge' is better. This corrects preposition use and sentence structure.

× I think the interest is significantly important in the study because I experienced that my major linguistics was really difficult to study without my interest.

✓ I think interest is very important in studying because I experienced that my major, linguistics, was really difficult to study without interest.

The sentence is mostly correct but can be improved by removing unnecessary articles and clarifying phrasing. 'Significantly important' is awkward; 'very important' is better. Also, 'in the study' should be 'in studying'. This addresses modal verb usage and adjective use.

× I had a test of linguistics, but I did very.

✓ I had a linguistics test, but I did not do very well.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an adverb to describe performance. 'Did very' is incorrect; it should be 'did not do very well' to express poor performance. This corrects past tense usage and sentence structure.