School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，句子结构不够清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

예시: My primary school, high school, and university are all in Shanghai because I was born here. Studying here is convenient, and I can go back home on weekends and holidays.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且信息有些混乱。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，清晰表达对不同学校的看法。

예시: I like both my primary school and university because the teachers there are friendly and kind. However, my high school teachers were not as kind.

제안: 回答较为完整，但部分表达不够地道，建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式，使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, I would recommend my school to others because the learning environment is efficient and comfortable. For example, during my studies, we had many opportunities to study abroad as exchange students, and the teachers were friendly and professional.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，词汇使用不够准确，建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，表达更具体。

예시: I would say my school is like a national public park because it has a large area for plants. The school is surrounded by a river and has many teaching buildings.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，部分词汇使用不当，建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达观点。

예시: I think interest is very important in studying because research or using equipment can sometimes be boring and frustrating. Only enthusiasm for the subject can motivate us to keep going.

× All my school including primary school, high school and universities and universities are all in Shanghai because I born here and study here is convenient and I can back to my home on weekend and holiday.

✓ All my schools including primary school, high school and universities are all in Shanghai because I was born here and studying here is convenient and I can go back to my home on weekends and holidays.

这里'school'应为复数形式'schools'，因为提到了多个学校。'universities'重复出现，应去掉一个。'weekend'和'holiday'应使用复数形式。

× All my school including primary school, high school and universities and universities are all in Shanghai because I born here and study here is convenient and I can back to my home on weekend and holiday.

✓ All my schools including primary school, high school and universities are all in Shanghai because I was born here and studying here is convenient and I can go back to my home on weekends and holidays.

'born'前缺少助动词'was'，表示过去时态。

× All my school including primary school, high school and universities and universities are all in Shanghai because I born here and study here is convenient and I can back to my home on weekend and holiday.

✓ All my schools including primary school, high school and universities are all in Shanghai because I was born here and studying here is convenient and I can go back to my home on weekends and holidays.

'study here is convenient'中'study'应改为动名词'studying'，表示动作的进行或状态。

× All my school including primary school, high school and universities and universities are all in Shanghai because I born here and study here is convenient and I can back to my home on weekend and holiday.

✓ All my schools including primary school, high school and universities are all in Shanghai because I was born here and studying here is convenient and I can go back to my home on weekends and holidays.

'on weekend and holiday'应为'on weekends and holidays'，表示复数的时间点。

× I like both my primary and university because all the teachers I met is friendly and full of kindness, and I had enthusiasm about teaching students while my high school student teacher is not such kindly.

✓ I like both my primary school and university because all the teachers I met were friendly and full of kindness, and I had enthusiasm about teaching students while my high school student teacher was not so kind.

'met'是过去时，后面的动词应与主语一致，'is'应改为'were'。'had'正确。'is not such kindly'中'kindly'应为形容词'kind'，且时态应为过去时'was'。

× I like both my primary and university because all the teachers I met is friendly and full of kindness, and I had enthusiasm about teaching students while my high school student teacher is not such kindly.

✓ I like both my primary school and university because all the teachers I met were friendly and full of kindness, and I had enthusiasm about teaching students while my high school student teacher was not so kind.

'kindly'是副词，描述动作；此处应使用形容词'kind'来描述老师的性格。

× I like both my primary and university because all the teachers I met is friendly and full of kindness, and I had enthusiasm about teaching students while my high school student teacher is not such kindly.

✓ I like both my primary school and university because all the teachers I met were friendly and full of kindness, and I had enthusiasm about teaching students while my high school student teacher was not so kind.

'teachers'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'were'。

× Yes, I will recommend my school to others because learning here is efficient and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I recommend my school to others because learning here is efficient and comfortable.

表达习惯和事实时，通常用一般现在时，'will recommend'改为'recommend'更自然。

× For example, during my study time, we have so much chance to study abroad as exchange students and teachers are friendly and professional.

✓ For example, during my study time, we have so many chances to study abroad as exchange students and teachers are friendly and professional.

'chance'应为复数'chances'，且与'much'搭配不当，应使用'many'。

× I would say that my school looks like a national public park as it have large amount of area to grow plant and the school is surrounded by a river and there are many blocks for teaching.

✓ I would say that my school looks like a national public park as it has a large amount of area to grow plants and the school is surrounded by a river and there are many blocks for teaching.

'it have'应为'it has'，主谓一致。'plant'应为复数'plants'。

× I would say that my school looks like a national public park as it have large amount of area to grow plant and the school is surrounded by a river and there are many blocks for teaching.

✓ I would say that my school looks like a national public park as it has a large amount of area to grow plants and the school is surrounded by a river and there are many blocks for teaching.

主语是单数'it'，谓语动词应为单数形式'has'。

× I would say that my school looks like a national public park as it have large amount of area to grow plant and the school is surrounded by a river and there are many blocks for teaching.

✓ I would say that my school looks like a national public park as it has a large amount of area to grow plants and the school is surrounded by a river and there are many blocks for teaching.

'large amount of area'应加冠词'a'，且'area'通常用作不可数名词，此处表达可接受。

× I think interest is important to study because most of the time doing research or doing equipment is a little bit boring and destroying, so only enthusiasm about the subject or about the study can push us to continue.

✓ I think interest is important to study because most of the time doing research or using equipment is a little bit boring and destructive, so only enthusiasm about the subject or about the study can push us to continue.

'doing equipment'不合适，应改为'using equipment'。

× I think interest is important to study because most of the time doing research or doing equipment is a little bit boring and destroying, so only enthusiasm about the subject or about the study can push us to continue.

✓ I think interest is important to study because most of the time doing research or using equipment is a little bit boring and destructive, so only enthusiasm about the subject or about the study can push us to continue.

'destroying'用作形容词不合适，应使用'destructive'表示破坏性的意思。