School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has some pronunciation and grammar mistakes, and the sentences are not very clear or natural. Try to speak clearly and use simple, correct sentences. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. For example, say where your school is and describe it briefly in a clear way.

예시: My school is called Coupon Dog, and it is located in the center of Tapatali, Bulgaria. It is surrounded by a garden with many trees, which makes it a pleasant place to study.

제안: Your answer is generally good but a bit unclear and sometimes redundant. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid vague phrases like "school is the way" and be more specific about what you like.

예시: Yes, I really like my school because it offers many opportunities to learn new things. For example, I enjoy doing experiments in science classes, and I also like communicating with my classmates and teachers, which helps me gain knowledge.

제안: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrases. Try to speak more confidently and use clear sentences. Also, organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it is located in a peaceful area called Coupon Doll. Moreover, the neighborhood is helpful, and the school has a large campus of about two acres, so there is no disturbance from traffic or noise.

제안: Your answer repeats some ideas and has incomplete sentences. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about the environment.

예시: The environment at my school is friendly and peaceful. Since it is located away from busy traffic, it is very calm, which helps students focus on their studies. Because of this, I enjoy going to school every day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas fully and clearly. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases. Also, finish your sentences properly.

예시: Interest in study is very important because it motivates people of all ages to learn new things. For example, reading books or novels can help express and enhance creativity, which improves a person's skills and knowledge.

× My school is surrounded with the garden is less trees.

✓ My school is surrounded by a garden with few trees.

The phrase 'surrounded with the garden is less trees' is grammatically incorrect. The correct preposition is 'surrounded by'. Also, 'less trees' should be 'few trees' because 'trees' is countable. 'Less' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'few' is used with countable nouns.

× My school is surrounded with the garden is less trees.

✓ My school is surrounded by a garden with few trees.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'surrounded'. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate what surrounds the school.

× My school is located at uh, the coupon doll, which is peaceful area and the neighborhood is very helpful over there so umm we have around 2 acres of land which is very much large and huge, so we don't get any disturbance from the traffic as well as the people so it is.

✓ My school is located in Coupon Dog, which is a peaceful area, and the neighborhood is very helpful. We have around 2 acres of land, which is very large and huge, so we don't get any disturbance from the traffic or the people.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'Coupon Dog'; the correct preposition is 'in' for locations like towns or areas. Also, 'from the traffic as well as the people' is better expressed as 'from the traffic or the people' for clarity.

× we have around 2 acres of land which is very much large and huge

✓ we have around 2 acres of land which is very large and huge

The phrase 'very much large and huge' is incorrect. 'Much' is not used with adjectives like 'large' and 'huge'. Instead, 'very' alone is sufficient to intensify the adjectives.

× The environment at my school is very friendly as well as peaceful. So we are situated at the center of the and we are very far from the traffic.

✓ The environment at my school is very friendly as well as peaceful. We are situated in the center and are very far from the traffic.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'the center'. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being located within an area or place.

× I think all the people from young to age of maybe 60 are most all be interested in studying, even if that is the book or maybe some novel.

✓ I think all people from young to around 60 years old are mostly interested in studying, whether it is a book or a novel.

The phrase 'most all be interested' is incorrect; it should be 'mostly interested'. Also, 'from young to age of maybe 60' is better expressed as 'from young to around 60 years old'. The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used for 'book or novel'; 'it' is more appropriate.

× Because what I think is like studying can make you express your creativity.

✓ Because I think studying can help you express your creativity.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unnecessary words like 'is like'. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It will enhance your creativity as well as it will make you a better.

✓ It will enhance your creativity and make you better.

The phrase 'make you a better' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'make you better'. Also, 'as well as' is better replaced with 'and' for smoother connection.