School— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Where is your school?
수험생
I am studying at A at the Academy of Policy and Development, which is located in Hanoi. The campus is surrounded by many trees, creating a peaceful and beautiful environment.
시험관
Do you like your school?
수험생
Yes, I really like my school because it has a variety of facilities, such as a library and computer labs, which help schools study effectively. These resources make learning more enjoyable and convenient for everyone.
시험관
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
수험생
Absolutely, I think my school is a good place to study because the facility are excellent and originally the teacher are supportive and knowledgeable to to help us.
시험관
What is the environment like at your school?
수험생
My school is surrounded by many trees and creating a beautiful, beautiful and peaceful atmosphere. This thing help students feel enjoyable and relaxed to study during study.
시험관
How important is interest in study?
수험생
Interesting study play an important role in in studying.
평가
총점
Part 1
Where is your school?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có thông tin cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu đầu hơi dài và có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp ("studying at A at the Academy" không rõ ràng). Bạn nên nói rõ ràng tên trường và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời giữ câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn.
예시: I study at the Academy of Policy and Development in Hanoi. The campus is surrounded by many trees, which creates a peaceful and beautiful environment.
Do you like your school?
점수: 85.0제안: Bạn trả lời tốt với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tuy nhiên, câu "help schools study effectively" không chính xác về ngữ pháp và ý nghĩa. Bạn nên dùng "help students study effectively" và tránh lặp từ như "resources" và "learning" quá gần nhau.
예시: Yes, I really like my school because it offers many facilities, such as a library and computer labs, which help students study effectively. These resources make learning more enjoyable and convenient.
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "facility are", "originally", và lặp từ "to to". Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, dùng từ phù hợp và câu rõ ràng hơn.
예시: Absolutely, I think my school is a good place to study because the facilities are excellent, and the teachers are supportive and knowledgeable, which helps us learn better.
What is the environment like at your school?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác và có lặp từ "beautiful". Ngoài ra, "This thing help students feel enjoyable" không đúng ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.
예시: My school is surrounded by many trees, which creates a beautiful and peaceful atmosphere. This helps students feel relaxed and enjoy their studies.
How important is interest in study?
점수: 40.0제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ nghĩa, có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng như "Interesting study play" và lặp từ "in in". Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ hơn với câu chủ đề và giải thích cụ thể về tầm quan trọng của sự hứng thú trong học tập.
예시: Interest in studying is very important because it motivates students to learn more effectively and enjoy the process.
문법
× My school is surrounded by many trees and creating a beautiful, beautiful and peaceful atmosphere.
✓ My school is surrounded by many trees and creates a beautiful and peaceful atmosphere.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'creating' after 'and', which causes a sentence structure error. The correct form is to use the verb 'creates' to maintain parallel structure and proper subject-verb agreement.
× the facility are excellent and originally the teacher are supportive and knowledgeable to to help us.
✓ the facilities are excellent and originally the teachers are supportive and knowledgeable to help us.
The nouns 'facility' and 'teacher' should be plural ('facilities' and 'teachers') to agree with the plural verb 'are'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× which help schools study effectively.
✓ which help students study effectively.
The pronoun 'schools' is incorrect here; it should be 'students' as the facilities help students study effectively, not schools.
× Interesting study play an important role in in studying.
✓ Interesting study plays an important role in studying.
The adjective 'Interesting' should be 'Interesting study' as a noun phrase, and the verb 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with the singular subject. Also, the repeated 'in' is an error.
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