School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to correct pronunciation errors and avoid redundancy. Use clear and concise sentences, for example, say "My school is near my house, so it takes me about 10 minutes to get there. I like it because the teachers are very good."

예시: My school is near my house, so it takes me about 10 minutes to get there. I like it because the teachers are very good.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I like my school because I learn many things that help me in life. Also, I enjoy seeing my friends there."

예시: Yes, I like my school because I learn many things that help me in life. Also, I enjoy seeing my friends there.

제안: Try to avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use clear reasons and linking words. For example, "Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because the teachers are helpful and supportive."

예시: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because the teachers are helpful and supportive.

제안: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. For example, "The environment at my school is very enjoyable because there are many trees that give us shade, making it feel like a forest. I like everything about my school."

예시: The environment at my school is very enjoyable because there are many trees that give us shade, making it feel like a forest. I like everything about my school.

제안: Complete your sentences and use clear explanations. For example, "Interest in study is very important because it helps us improve our skills and knowledge, which is necessary for our future careers."

예시: Interest in study is very important because it helps us improve our skills and knowledge, which is necessary for our future careers.

× My stool is near of my house so I maybe take 1010 minutes to go to my school and it's a good school because I like I like the teachers there because they are so good.

✓ My school is near my house so I may take 10 minutes to go to my school and it's a good school because I like the teachers there as they are very good.

The phrase 'near of my house' is incorrect; the preposition 'of' should be omitted after 'near'. Also, 'maybe' is incorrectly used; 'may' is the correct modal verb here to express possibility. Additionally, '1010 minutes' seems to be a typo and should be '10 minutes'. The repetition 'I like I like' should be corrected to a single 'I like'. The conjunction 'because' is repeated unnecessarily; it should be simplified for clarity.

× Yes I do like my school because I I learning more.

✓ Yes, I do like my school because I am learning more.

The verb 'learning' requires an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'I am learning' instead of 'I learning'. Also, a comma after 'Yes' improves sentence clarity.

× I do learn there a lot of things of my life and I do see my friends there and get enjoy enjoy at our school and learn everything. Too.

✓ I do learn a lot of things about my life there, and I see my friends there and enjoy our school and learn everything too.

The phrase 'a lot of things of my life' is incorrect; the preposition 'about' should be used instead of 'of'. The phrase 'get enjoy enjoy' is incorrect; 'enjoy' alone suffices. The word 'Too' should be lowercase and placed at the end of the sentence. Also, sentence structure is improved by rearranging phrases for clarity.

× Yes, it is. I think my school is so, uh, good place to study 'cause it's because there's a lot of good teachers and they are so helpful and thankful and I thank.

✓ Yes, it is. I think my school is a good place to study because there are a lot of good teachers who are very helpful and kind, and I am thankful.

The phrase 'so, uh, good place' is informal and 'so' is unnecessary here. The conjunctions 'cause' and 'because' are redundant; only one should be used. 'Thankful' is an adjective and should be used with 'I am' rather than 'I thank'. The word 'thankful' is more appropriate than 'thank' in this context. Also, 'they are so helpful and thankful' is incorrect; people are 'helpful' and 'kind' or 'grateful', but 'thankful' fits better for the speaker's feeling.

× The environment in the school, it's too enjoyable because there's a lot of tea which let us like in a forest, see a tree is 'cause they are let let us in shadow and I like everything at my school.

✓ The environment in the school is very enjoyable because there are a lot of trees which make us feel like we are in a forest. The trees provide shade, and I like everything at my school.

The word 'tea' is a typo and should be 'trees'. The phrase 'which let us like in a forest' is incorrect; it should be 'which make us feel like we are in a forest'. The phrase 'see a tree is 'cause they are let let us in shadow' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'The trees provide shade'. The word 'too' is better replaced with 'very' for positive emphasis.

× It's very important thing to to go professional and study 'cause this is a good things to do to improve our skills and develop our knowledge at school.

✓ It's a very important thing to go professional and study because these are good things to do to improve our skills and develop our knowledge at school.

The phrase 'very important thing' needs the article 'a' before it. The phrase 'this is a good things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural, so 'this is' should be 'these are'. Also, 'to to' is a repetition and should be corrected to a single 'to'. The conjunction 'cause' should be replaced with 'because' for formality.