School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giới thiệu tên trường và vị trí một cách ngắn gọn, tự nhiên.

예시: I am currently studying at Din Ting Huang High School, which is located on Soviet Newton Street.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do thích trường bằng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I really like my school because it offers many opportunities for learning and personal growth.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng cần dùng câu ngắn gọn, đúng ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I think my school is a good place to study because teachers always support students and organize activities to learn about science and technology.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ không phù hợp. Bạn nên mô tả môi trường học tập một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc.

예시: The environment at my school is very open, where many students can discuss topics like history and science, and teachers and students communicate freely.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ý và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về tầm quan trọng của sự hứng thú trong học tập và giải thích rõ ràng.

예시: Interest in study is very important because it helps students stay motivated and understand the subjects better through engaging lectures and activities.

× At now I study in high school, my name school is Din Ting Huang High School Din Ting Huang High School in Soviet Newton St.

✓ Right now, I study at Din Ting Huang High School, which is located on Soviet Newton St.

The phrase 'At now' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'Right now' or 'Currently'. Also, 'my name school is' is incorrect; it should be 'my school's name is' or simply state the school name directly. Preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to studying at a school. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I really like my school because when I were 15, I needed to do a test to go, uh, the school, uh, where I choose to study in high school.

✓ I really like my school because when I was 15, I needed to take a test to enter the school where I chose to study in high school.

The verb 'were' should be 'was' for the first person singular past tense. 'Choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to match the past time frame. 'Do a test to go' is awkward; 'take a test to enter' is more appropriate.

× And the one reason is my school is have many.

✓ One reason is that my school has many resources.

The phrase 'my school is have many' is grammatically incorrect. 'Is have' is not a valid verb form. The correct verb is 'has' for third person singular. Also, 'many' should be followed by a plural noun, so specifying 'resources' or similar is necessary for clarity.

× I think it's my school in a good place to study because in my school teachers always support student in study and at school teachers always celebrate activity or program to learn about science or technologies.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because the teachers always support students in their studies and often organize activities or programs to learn about science and technology.

'It's my school in a good place' is incorrect; it should be 'my school is a good place'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Support student in study' should be 'support students in their studies'. 'Celebrate activity or program' is incorrect; 'organize activities or programs' is appropriate. 'Technologies' is better as 'technology' in this context.

× The environment like as my school that India many student can discussions about managing issue like uh, history, science or teachers and students can talk about many problem and expect it.

✓ The environment at my school allows many students to discuss issues like history and science, and teachers and students can talk about many problems and solve them.

'Many student' should be 'many students'. 'Can discussions' should be 'can discuss'. 'Managing issue' should be 'issues'. 'Many problem' should be 'many problems'. 'Expect it' is unclear; likely intended 'solve them' or 'address them'.

× The important interacting study that is a lectures, the lectures that is how to teach us to tell student about that subjects and teachers can have example like program activity.

✓ The important part of studying is the lectures; the lectures teach us about the subjects, and teachers can provide examples through programs and activities.

'Important interacting study' is unclear and incorrect; 'important part of studying' is better. 'That is a lectures' is incorrect; 'lectures' is plural, so 'that are lectures' or rephrased as above. 'Tell student about that subjects' should be 'teach us about the subjects'. 'Program activity' should be 'programs and activities'.