School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r clear korte, ebong preposition gulo thik bhabe use korte. For example, 'behind to my house' er bodole 'behind my house' bolben. Apnar answer e linking words use koren jate answer ta logical lage.

예시: I am currently studying at a university, but my school was located behind my house, about one kilometer away. I used to walk to school every day. I loved my school and often miss the time I spent there.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu grammar mistake o ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke concise r clear korte. Linking words use koren jate sentence gulo smoothly connect hoy. For example, 'because the atmosphere and environment of my school always very favorable for study' er bodole 'because the atmosphere is always favorable for studying' bolte paren.

예시: Yes, I like my school very much because the atmosphere is always favorable for studying. Moreover, all the teachers and classmates are very friendly, and my teachers always took great care of me.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r clear korte, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta logical lage. For example, 'there are a big library and a playground that's always motivated students' er bodole 'there is a big library and a playground, which always motivate students' bolte paren.

예시: Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because the environment is very suitable for students. There is a big library and a playground, which always motivate students to study and play. Also, the teachers are very caring.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu grammar mistake o ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke concise r clear korte. Linking words use koren jate sentence gulo smoothly connect hoy. For example, 'the infrastructure of my school is very updated' er bodole 'the infrastructure is modern' bolte paren.

예시: As I mentioned earlier, the environment of my school is very favorable for studies. The infrastructure is modern, the classrooms are well organized, and the overall facilities are suitable for learning.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r clear korte, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta logical lage. For example, 'interest that always influence individuals' er bodole 'interest always influences individuals' bolte paren.

예시: Interest in study is very important because it always influences individuals to study more and concentrate better. For example, when I was in school, I was very interested in math, so I studied a lot, and this helped me improve.

× Right now I am studying in an university but my school was behind to my house and it's almost 1 kilometer and I went my school by feet and I love my school and I really missed the time that I spent on my school.

✓ Right now I am studying in a university but my school was behind my house and it's almost 1 kilometer away and I went to my school on foot and I love my school and I really miss the time that I spent at my school.

The article 'an' is incorrect before 'university' because 'university' starts with a consonant sound 'y'. Use 'a' instead. Also, 'behind to my house' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'behind my house'. 'I went my school by feet' is incorrect; correct form is 'I went to my school on foot'. 'I really missed the time' should be 'I really miss the time' to match present tense context. 'Spent on my school' should be 'spent at my school' for correct preposition use.

× Yes, I like my school very much because the atmosphere and environment of my school always very favorable for study and all the teachers and all my classmates are very friendly and my teachers always took great care of me and that's all.

✓ Yes, I like my school very much because the atmosphere and environment of my school are always very favorable for study and all the teachers and all my classmates are very friendly and my teachers always take great care of me and that's all.

The verb 'are' is needed to agree with plural subject 'atmosphere and environment'. 'Always very favorable' needs 'are' to be grammatically correct. 'My teachers always took' should be 'my teachers always take' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because the environment is very appropriate for students and there are a big library and a playground that's always motivated students to study and play.

✓ Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because the environment is very appropriate for students and there is a big library and a playground that always motivate students to study and play.

'There are a big library' is incorrect because 'library' is singular; it should be 'there is a big library'. 'That's always motivated students' should be 'that always motivate students' because 'library and playground' is plural subject requiring plural verb 'motivate'.

× And the teacher of my school is very caring, so I think my school is very appropriate for study.

✓ And the teachers of my school are very caring, so I think my school is very appropriate for study.

'The teacher' is singular but context implies multiple teachers; 'teachers' plural is appropriate. Correspondingly, verb changes to 'are' to agree with plural subject.

× Well, as I mentioned earlier, the environment of my school is very favorable for studies and the infrastructure of my school is very updated and the classrooms are very well organized and the overall facility of my schools is suitable for study.

✓ Well, as I mentioned earlier, the environment of my school is very favorable for studies and the infrastructure of my school is very updated and the classrooms are very well organized and the overall facilities of my school are suitable for study.

'Overall facility' should be plural 'overall facilities' because it refers to multiple facilities. 'My schools' is incorrect; it should be 'my school' singular. Verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'facilities'.

× Interest in study is very important because the interest that always influence individuals to study more and concentrate on their studies.

✓ Interest in study is very important because the interest always influences individuals to study more and concentrate on their studies.

'Interest that always influence' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'interest' is singular and requires 'influences'. Also, 'that' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for smoother sentence.

× For example, when I was in my school, I was very interested in math so for that purpose I study a lot and this influence me.

✓ For example, when I was in my school, I was very interested in math so for that purpose I studied a lot and this influenced me.

'I study' should be past tense 'I studied' to match past time frame. 'This influence me' should be 'this influenced me' for past tense and subject-verb agreement.