School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains a confusing phrase 'ancient A city'. Try to be more precise and natural by directly stating the city name and avoiding awkward expressions. Also, keep the answer concise and relevant to the question.

예시: My school is Anchor University of Technology, located in Anqing city in Anhui province. It's a peaceful and pleasant place to study.

제안: Your answer is good, with clear opinions and supporting details. To improve, try to use more formal language and linking words to enhance coherence, for example, starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding reasons with linking phrases.

예시: Yes, I really like my school because the teachers are very supportive. Moreover, I have made many friends there, and the collaborative environment is both stimulating and positive.

제안: There is a likely mistake with the word 'mortality' which seems out of context. Be careful with vocabulary choice to ensure accuracy. Also, try to provide more specific and relevant details about why the school is good for studying, and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because it has a strong reputation for academic excellence. Additionally, the facilities are adequate, and the library is spacious and quiet, which helps with concentration.

제안: There is a small error with the word 'campers' which should be 'campus'. Try to use accurate vocabulary and organise your answer with linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating 'also' multiple times; use varied connectors.

예시: The campus is very relaxing, with many trees and flowers. Furthermore, there is a lake near the library, and several cafes and activity centres where students can socialise.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use more formal vocabulary and add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I believe that interest is extremely important in studying because it helps maintain motivation, particularly during difficult times. Without genuine interest, studying can become tedious and unproductive.

× I started at Anchor University of Technology, which is in my ancient A city in Anhui province.

✓ I started at Anchor University of Technology, which is in my ancient city A in Anhui province.

The adjective 'ancient' is used incorrectly here to describe 'A city'. It seems the intended meaning is to specify a city named 'A' that is ancient. The correct order is to place the adjective before the noun it modifies, so 'ancient city A' is correct. However, if 'A city' is a proper noun, 'ancient' should come before 'city' and 'A' should be after, or the phrase should be rephrased for clarity.

× The collaborative environment is both stimulating and positive.

✓ The collaborative environment was both stimulating and positive.

The student is talking about their past experience at the university, so the verb tense should be past to match the context. Using present tense 'is' conflicts with the past tense context of the rest of the answer.

× The university had a good reputation, especially for its mortality, and the facilities were decent.

✓ The university had a good reputation, especially for its morality, and the facilities were decent.

The word 'mortality' means death rate, which is incorrect in this context. The correct word is 'morality', meaning ethical standards, which fits the intended meaning of the sentence.

× The campers were pretty relaxing with a lot of trees and flowers.

✓ The campus was pretty relaxing with a lot of trees and flowers.

The word 'campers' refers to people who camp, which is incorrect here. The intended word is 'campus', which is singular and refers to the grounds of the university. Also, 'campus' is singular, so the verb should be 'was'.