School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“China is on the outskirts of Chengdu”不符合事实且表达混乱，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意语法正确性。

예시: My school is located on the outskirts of Chengdu, Sichuan province. It takes me about 40 minutes to get to downtown by subway. Although it's a bit far, the campus is very quiet, which is great for studying.

제안: 回答中表达重复且部分用词不准确，如“support for US studies”可能是笔误，应为“support for our studies”。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I really like my school because it provides excellent support for our studies. For example, the campus is quiet, the internet is fast, and the teachers are very dedicated. Therefore, I can learn effectively there.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“it's have a, it has a very good environment”不通顺。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

예시: Yes, I think my school is an excellent place to study because it has a quiet environment and plenty of academic facilities.

제안: 回答较好，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“planted in the campus”应为“planted on the campus”。建议简化句子结构，注意介词使用，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: The environment at my school is very quiet and natural. Since it is on the outskirts of the city, the atmosphere is calm, and there are many trees and flowers planted on the campus.

제안: 回答表达有些重复和不够简洁，如“having interest in study plays a key role in study”。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意句子流畅性。

예시: In my opinion, having interest in studying is very important because it helps students understand subjects more deeply. For example, when I study a subject I enjoy, I can absorb the knowledge more effectively.

× China is on the outskirts of Chengdu, so it's very inconvenient for us to go to the downtown.

✓ My school is on the outskirts of Chengdu, so it's very inconvenient for us to go to the downtown.

句子中主语应为“我的学校”，而不是“中国”。“There be”问题指的是句子中存在主语与谓语不匹配或主语错误的情况。这里应明确学校的位置，而不是国家的位置。

× It's usually takes me about 40 minutes by subway, but it's very quiet for us to study there.

✓ It usually takes me about 40 minutes by subway, and it's very quiet for us to study there.

“It's usually takes”中“it's”是不必要的，应直接用“It usually takes”。此外，连接词“but”用在这里不合适，因前后句意并不矛盾，改为“and”更合适。

× I really like my school because my school has great support for US studies.

✓ I really like my school because it has great support for us to study.

“US studies”应为“us to study”，这里“US”是错误的代词使用，应使用“us”表示“我们”。

× For example, it has very fast Internet, very quiet campus and the teacher who is very dedicated to teach us.

✓ For example, it has very fast Internet, a very quiet campus, and teachers who are very dedicated to teaching us.

“very quiet campus”前缺少冠词“a”，且“the teacher”应改为复数“teachers”，动词“teach”应改为动名词“teaching”以符合句意。

× So I love my school very much, I can learn well there.

✓ So I love my school very much; I can learn well there.

句子中两个独立分句应使用分号或句号分开，避免逗号连接两个独立句子。

× Yes, I think my school is a excellent place to study because it has a very quiet environment.

✓ Yes, I think my school is an excellent place to study because it has a very quiet environment.

“a excellent”中“excellent”以元音音素开头，冠词应使用“an”。

× So it's have a, it has a very good environment to study.

✓ So it has a very good environment to study.

“it's have”是错误的动词形式，应改为“it has”。

× Besides, it has abundant academic facilities to study.

✓ Besides, it has abundant academic facilities for studying.

“to study”用法不当，改为“for studying”更符合习惯表达。

× While the environment of our school is very quiet and full of good natural things, For example, it's on the outskirts of the city so it has a calm atmosphere to learn and it has a lot of trees and flowers planted in the campus.

✓ The environment of our school is very quiet and full of natural beauty. For example, it's on the outskirts of the city, so it has a calm atmosphere for learning and many trees and flowers planted on the campus.

“While”引导的让步状语从句后应有主句，原句结构混乱。应拆分为多个句子，且“in the campus”应改为“on the campus”。

× it has a lot of trees and flowers planted in the campus.

✓ it has a lot of trees and flowers planted on the campus.

“campus”作为场所名词，通常用介词“on”而非“in”。

× Well, in my perspective, having interest in study plays a key role in study because having the interests can help students learn more deeply about the subject they enjoy.

✓ Well, in my perspective, having interest in studying plays a key role in learning because having interest can help students learn more deeply about the subjects they enjoy.

“interest in study”应改为“interest in studying”，且“having the interests”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× For example, when I learn a subject I love, I'd love to I would absorb the knowledge better than anyone else.

✓ For example, when I learn a subject I love, I would absorb the knowledge better than anyone else.

“I'd love to I would”重复且不合适，应删去“I'd love to”。