School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且简短，但可以更自然和地道。建议去掉多余的冠词并补充更具体位置或城市以增加信息量，同时保持不超过五句。例如可说“I go to a university in Harbin, Heilongjiang.”

예시: I study at a university in Harbin, Heilongjiang, which is in the northeast of China.

제안: 表达观点清晰但语气有些消极且使用了口头语（uh），同时提到QS分数显得专业但未解释对个人的影响。建议用更礼貌的表达并给出一两个具体原因或感受，减少口头填充词，并保持句子简洁连贯。

예시: To be honest, I’m not very satisfied with my school because it lacks funding and famous programs, which limits some academic opportunities.

제안: 回答结构合理但有重复（“good place to study”多次出现）和语法问题（search information, reading books）。建议用一到两句话给出主题句并用连词展开具体例子，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I think it’s a good place to study because it has a large, well-maintained library where students can easily find books and access online journals for research.

제안: 内容具体但有语法错误（so it has quite → so it’s quiet）和口头语（Well）。建议使用连词增加连贯性，并用形容词和具体画面丰富描述，同时注意句子完整性。

예시: The campus is quiet and picturesque, with many trees and flowerbeds where students often sit and read under the shade.

제안: 观点明确但表达重复且有语法问题（ability of the study）。建议用一到两句给出中心观点并用具体原因或例子支持，避免重复相同短语。

예시: Interest in studying is crucial because it boosts motivation and helps you focus, so motivated students are more likely to spend extra time reading and practicing, which improves their skills.

× My school is in the Heilongjiang province.

✓ My school is in Heilongjiang province.

中文解释：在地名前通常不需要定冠词“the”，尤其是省、州等行政区名称前一般直接使用名称。建议去掉“the”。

× Well to be honest, no I don't because my school is not a famous school and uh, the QS of my school is very low.

✓ Well, to be honest, no, I don't, because my school is not famous and its QS ranking is very low.

中文解释：原句中“is not a famous school”可以更自然地表达为“is not famous”；另外“the QS of my school”搭配不当，应改为“its QS ranking”。同时注意插入语的逗号。建议用更自然的名词短语并保持主谓一致。

× Yes, my school is a good place to study because it has a clean and big library.

✓ Yes, my school is a good place to study because it has a clean, large library.

中文解释：“big library”语义可用“large library”更地道；形容词并列时用逗号隔开并注意顺序（大小/形状通常放在前），但更自然表达为“a clean, large library”。

× People can search some information and reading book in the library so it's a good place to study.

✓ People can search for information and read books in the library, so it's a good place to study.

中文解释：并列动词应保持相同形式。原句中“search”后接“reading”形式不一致，应改为“search for” + 动词原形“read”。此外，“search information”要加介词“for”，“book”需复数以匹配一般意义。建议保持并列动词形式一致并使用正确搭配。

× The environment is quiet and beautiful. Well my school has so many trees and flowers and people always reading books under the trees, so it has quite.

✓ The environment is quiet and beautiful. My school has many trees and flowers, and people are always reading books under the trees, so it's quite peaceful.

中文解释：原句中“so many trees”可保留但“so many”在正式回答中改为“many”更自然；“people always reading”缺少be动词，应改为“people are always reading”；结尾“so it has quite”语法错误，意图是“很安静/平和”，应改为“so it's quite peaceful”。建议注意时态和句子末尾的形容词搭配。

× How important is interest in study? / I think the interest in study is very important because it can improve your ability of the study and the interest can push you to study hard and read more books.

✓ I think interest in studying is very important because it can improve your study ability and can motivate you to study hard and read more books.

中文解释：短语“interest in study”不够地道，应改为“interest in studying”；“ability of the study”搭配错误，应改为“study ability”或“ability to study”；重复“the interest”可简化为“can motivate you”。建议使用更自然的名词短语并避免冗余。