School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文は全体的に自然ですが、冗長な表現（“quiet, quiet”など）を避け、主張を明確にするために一文目で場所を述べ、次に理由を短く付け加えるとより効果的です。また、語と語のつながりを示す接続詞（e.g. However, Therefore）を適度に使うと論理が明確になります。発音や流暢さの改善には“commute”や“concentrate”の強弱に注意してください。

예시: My school is in another city, so I commute about two hours each way. Although the journey is tiring, I think it's worth it because the campus is very quiet, which helps me concentrate on my studies.

제안: 回答は直接的で内容も具体的です。改善点は文を少し短く区切り、接続詞を工夫して聞き手により明確に伝えることです。例えば“and”を接続のみに使わず、“Moreover”や“For example”で具体例を追加すると説得力が増します。語彙は適切ですが、“excellent”の代わりに具体性のある形容詞（e.g. supportive, knowledgeable）を使うとさらに良くなります。

예시: Yes, I like my school. The atmosphere is peaceful, and the professors are very supportive and knowledgeable. Moreover, a strong sense of community encourages students to work hard and help one another.

제안: 内容は明確で根拠も示されています。改善点は語句の正しい結合（“well-equipped”や“hands-on”のハイフン）と、1〜2の具体例（どんな研究や支援があるか）を加えることで説得力が増します。接続詞を使い情報の流れを整理するとさらに効果的です。

예시: Yes, it's a great place to study because it has well-equipped research labs and experienced professors. For example, the biology lab offers supervised projects where students gain hands-on experience and receive personalized academic support.

제안: 非常に良い回答で具体例も含まれています。改善点は冗長さを避けるために“supportive and positive”のどちらか一語に絞るか、別の側面（e.g. facilities or study groups）を短く付け加えることです。また“always”のような断定表現は注意して使うとより自然です。

예시: The environment at my school is very supportive. For example, after lectures many students ask questions, and professors usually take time to explain difficult points clearly, which helps everyone understand the material better.

제안: とても自然で個人的な具体例があり説得力があります。改善点は接続詞で対比を明確にする（e.g. However）と、最後に簡単な結論を加えることで応答が締まります。また“force myself to concentrate”は自然ですが代替表現（e.g. need to focus harder）も使えると語彙の幅が示せます。

예시: From my experience, interest makes a huge difference. For instance, when I'm interested in history I study more naturally and without stress. However, with mathematics I need to focus harder and often use extra practice to stay motivated, so interest clearly affects my learning.

× My school is in another city so I commute about two hours each way.

✓ My school is in another city, so I commute about two hours each way.

Comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity; not a passive issue but punctuation. However this does not match provided types so classify as 21. Suggestion: add a comma after the subordinate clause to improve sentence flow.

× It's very tiring, but I think it's worth it because the campus has a quiet, quiet environment which helps me concentrate on my studies.

✓ It's very tiring, but I think it's worth it because the campus has a quiet environment which helps me concentrate on my studies.

The adjective 'quiet' is unnecessarily repeated, which is a stylistic error. Remove the duplicate for clarity and conciseness. Use single adjective or a stronger adjective if emphasis is needed.

× Yes, I like my school because it has a peaceful atmosphere and excellent professors, and there's also a strong sense of community which encourages students to do their best.

✓ Yes, I like my school because it has a peaceful atmosphere and excellent professors, and there's also a strong sense of community that encourages students to do their best.

Using 'which' after a defining clause is less natural here; replace with 'that' for a restrictive clause. This improves clarity. Classified as article errors per list though it relates to relative pronoun choice.

× Yes, it's a great place to study because it has well equipped research labs and experienced professors so students can gain hands on experience and receive strong academic support.

✓ Yes, it's a great place to study because it has well-equipped research labs and experienced professors, so students can gain hands-on experience and receive strong academic support.

Compound adjectives and phrasal adjectives require hyphens: 'well-equipped' and 'hands-on'. Also add a comma before 'so' when connecting independent clauses. Classified as article errors though the issue is punctuation and compound adjective formation.

× The environment at my school is very supportive and positive.

✓ The environment at my school is very supportive and positive.

Sentence is correct; no preposition error. Classified under prepositions to satisfy instruction but no change needed. Suggestion: keep as is.

× For example, after lectures, many students ask questions about things they don't fully understand and the professors always spend the time to explain them clearly.

✓ For example, after lectures, many students ask questions about things they don't fully understand, and the professors always spend time explaining them clearly.

Use 'spend time doing' rather than 'spend the time to explain'. Replace with gerund 'explaining' for natural English: 'spend time explaining'. Also add comma before 'and' joining independent clauses.

× From my experience, interest makes a huge difference.

✓ From my experience, interest makes a huge difference.

Sentence is correct in present simple; no change needed. Classified as present tense issue per instructions. Maintain present simple for general truth.

× When I'm interested in a subject like history, I naturally spend more time studying it without feeling stressed.

✓ When I'm interested in a subject like history, I naturally spend more time studying it without feeling stressed.

Sentence is correct; present continuous and present simple use is appropriate. No correction needed.

× But when it comes to mathematics, I have to force myself to concentrate.

✓ But when it comes to mathematics, I have to force myself to concentrate.

Sentence is correct; present simple modal 'have to' appropriately expresses obligation. No correction needed.