School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the basic information directly and avoid unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence giving location, then give one brief specific detail (e.g., campus type or nearby landmark). Use simple, correct sentence structure and avoid repeating or fragmented phrases.

예시: My language school is in Oakland, Indiana, near the city center. It is in a commercial building close to several shops, which makes it convenient for breaks.

제안: Keep the answer concise and avoid repetition. Give one clear reason and one specific example of how teachers help you, using linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

예시: Yes, I like my school because the teachers are very experienced. For example, my teacher gives detailed feedback on my speaking which helps me improve quickly.

제안: State your opinion clearly, then support it with two specific reasons. Use linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'and') and correct grammar (quiet, clean, many facilities). Avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

예시: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because it is quiet and clean, and there are many useful facilities such as a library and study rooms.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence describing the environment, then add one or two specific details. Use simple, accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'modern building,' 'several floors') and avoid hesitation and unclear fragments.

예시: The school is in a modern, shared building with three floors. The classrooms are bright, and there is a small cafe and a study area on the ground floor.

제안: Express the main idea directly and give one reason and an example. Correct grammar: refer to 'interest in studying' or 'being interested in study.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example.'

예시: I think being interested in studying is very important because it motivates you to keep learning. For example, when I enjoy a topic, I spend more time practicing and remember it better.

× My language school is located in Oakland, IN. There is MMM that is placed in CBDCBD Is a commercialized building a area?

✓ My language school is located in Oakland, IN. There is a building called MMM that is located in the CBD. It is a commercialized area.

Multiple problems: incorrect use of 'there is' with unclear noun phrase and word order. Use 'There is a building called MMM' to introduce existence, then 'located in the CBD' for location. Replace 'Is a commercialized building a area?' with 'It is a commercialized area' to form a proper declarative sentence. Ensure correct article 'a' before singular countable nouns and natural word order.

× Yes, I like my school because there are a lot of quality teachers. They they have. They help me, always help me to improve my English learning.

✓ Yes, I like my school because there are a lot of quality teachers. They are helpful. They always help me improve my English.

Original has redundancy and awkward structure. 'They they have.' is ungrammatical and should be removed. 'Help me, always help me to improve my English learning' is repetitive and uses 'to improve my English learning' awkwardly. Use 'They always help me improve my English' — no 'to' necessary after 'help' when followed by base verb; 'English' is sufficient instead of 'English learning.'

× Yes, I do. Uh, it's good to study. It's a good place to study because, uh, there is so quiet and clean and there are, there are so a lot of facility for.

✓ Yes, I do. It's a good place to study because it is quiet and clean, and there are many facilities.

Incorrect use of 'there is' with adjectives: use 'it is quiet and clean' to describe the place. 'There are, there are so a lot of facility for' contains article and quantifier errors. Use 'there are many facilities' for plural countable noun. Remove extraneous filler words and correct word order.

× My school is the common building is they, uh, it has uh, test pro floors. OK, OK.

✓ My school is in a common building. It has several floors for testing.

Original is fragmented and has pronoun/reference problems. 'My school is the common building is they' is ungrammatical. Recast into two clear sentences: location 'in a common building' and description 'It has several floors for testing.' Use 'several' for unspecified plural and correct noun phrases.

× How important is interest in study? I think we are really crucial to study because, uh, have having interest in study is the motivation to study.

✓ I think interest in studying is very important because having interest in study is the motivation to learn.

Multiple issues: 'we are really crucial to study' incorrectly uses 'crucial' with 'we are'. The subject should be 'interest' as the thing that is important. Use gerund 'studying' or phrase 'interest in study'. 'Have having' is redundant; use 'having'. Replace 'motivation to study' with 'motivation to learn' for natural phrasing. Overall clarify subject and correct adjective/adverb placement ('very important').