School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Javobni qisqa va aniq qilib tuzing. Subyekt va fe’lni to‘g‘ri ishlating (masalan, "My school is near my home"). Keraksiz takrorlar va pauzalardan qoching. Manzilni batafsilroq, aniq vaqt yoki masofa bilan ifodalang.

예시: My school is very close to my home; it takes only two or three minutes to walk there. Because of that, I can easily go home if I forget something or need to get anything quickly.

제안: Javobni aniqlashtiring va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri qilib ayting. "Because" bilan boshlagan sababni to‘liq ifoda eting. Noaniq so‘zlar (masalan, "we. Intelligence") o‘rniga aniq misollar keltiring.

예시: Yes, I like my school a lot because it is very clean and well-organised. The teachers are kind and supportive, and I especially enjoy science lessons because they are interesting and practical.

제안: Subyekt-fe‘l kelishigiga e’tibor bering ("school is"), gapni qisqaroq va tartibli qiling. Konkret misollar va bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalaning (for example, "for example", "because").

예시: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it helps students develop important skills. For example, we have practical science classes and group projects that improve our problem-solving and communication skills.

제안: Javobni strukturaviy qiling: asosiy fikr + qo‘shimcha tafsilot. "Teamwork" yoki "classroom atmosphere" kabi atamalardan to‘g‘ri foydalaning va takrorlardan saqlaning.

예시: The environment at my school is very collaborative; students often work together on projects. This teamwork helps us improve our skills and learn how to communicate and solve problems as a group.

제안: Gapni to‘g‘ri boshlang ("Interest in studying is...") va shaxs mosligini saqlang ("people" va "their"). Sabablarni aniq va qisqa qilib izohlang, misol keltiring.

예시: Interest in studying is very important because it motivates people to learn and improves their future career prospects. For instance, a student who enjoys science is more likely to study hard and pursue a STEM career.

× My school near my home and it's not takes a long time to go to the school and when I need something, I just, uh, go to uh, I just come, come back my home in, uh, two or three minutes.

✓ My school is near my home and it does not take a long time to go to school, and when I need something, I just go back home in two or three minutes.

Siz 'There be' tuzilmasini ishlatishingiz kerak: 'My school is near my home'. Shuningdek, 'it does not take' deb yordamchi fe'l + asosiy fe'l shaklini ishlatish zarur; 'takes' nojo'ya bo'ladi. Ingliz tilida 'go to school' odatda 'the' ishlatmaydi. Taklif: 'My school is near my home and it does not take a long time to go to school.'

× Yes, of course I love my school because it's very clean for me and when I when I come here, I just enjoy every every science and my teachers are really kind and we. Intelligence.

✓ Yes, of course I love my school because it is very clean, and when I come here, I enjoy every science class. My teachers are really kind and we are intelligent.

'It's' to'liq 'it is' bo'lib ishlatilishi mumkin, lekin 'enjoy every science' noaniq; 'science class' yoki 'science subject' kerak. Sentensiyaning oxiri noto'g'ri, 'we. Intelligence.' o'rniga to'liq gap: 'we are intelligent.' Taklif: '...I enjoy every science class. My teachers are really kind and we are intelligent.'

× Yes, of course, uh, school are really good place to study because you can, uh, improve yours, You can improve your skills in the school and you can learn many kind of things about the world and you can enjoy uh, when you learn many things.

✓ Yes, of course, the school is a really good place to study because you can improve yourself. You can improve your skills at school, learn many kinds of things about the world, and enjoy learning.

'School' yagona bo'lgani uchun fe'l 'is' bo'lishi kerak, shuning uchun 'school are' xato. 'A really good place' oldidan 'a' kerak. 'Improve yours' noto'g'ri zamon va olmosh; kerakli shakl 'improve yourself'. 'Many kind of things' o'rniga 'many kinds of things' yoki 'many kinds of things' ishlatiladi. Taklif: 'the school is a really good place... improve yourself... many kinds of things.'

× I love the environment that is when I work with my classmates because it's it's to help us to improve our skills and it's help us to learn how to work with the team, teamwork and when we work.

✓ I love the environment when I work with my classmates because it helps us improve our skills and learn how to work as a team.

'That is when' keraksiz murakkablik; 'environment when' yetarli. 'It's it's to help us' xato; kerakli shakl 'it helps us'. 'Help us to improve' o'rniga 'helps us improve' tabiiyroq. 'Work with the team' o'rniga 'work as a team' yaxshi. Taklif: 'it helps us improve our skills and learn how to work as a team.'

× Interested in study very important to every people because it's a very helpful for your career, a future career. And when they learn every every study, they can improve your skills and they must improve their skills.

✓ Being interested in studying is very important for everyone because it is very helpful for your future career. When people study, they can improve their skills and they must improve their skills.

'Interested in study' noto'g'ri; kerakli forma 'being interested in studying' yoki 'interest in studying'. 'Every people' xato; to'g'ri 'everyone' yoki 'every person'. 'It's a very helpful for your career' da 'helpful' bilan 'a' kerak emas va 'your' va 'they' aralashayotgani noto'g'ri; yagona nuqtai nazar bilan 'your' ishlatmaslik kerak. Oxirgi jumlada 'they can improve your skills' noto'g'ri zamon-almosh; 'their skills' ishlatilishi kerak. Taklif: 'Being interested in studying is very important for everyone because it is helpful for their future career.'