School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 在回答位置类问题时，注意句子简洁且逻辑清晰。避免重复表述（例如“modern city with a larger population”与“rural areas”信息冲突且冗余）。时间表达可更自然（例如“an hour and a half”）。建议先给出直接答案，然后用一两句具体细节说明通勤时间和频率。

예시: My school is in the suburbs of Nanjing. It’s about an hour and a half from the city center, so I rarely go into town during weekdays.

제안: 注意主谓一致和冠词使用（例如“has modern facilities”而非“a modern facilities”）。回答要有条理：先直接表态，然后列出两到三个具体原因，用连词（because, and, for example）连接。细节要准确自然，避免语法错误和拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I really like my school because it has modern facilities such as a cafeteria and a health center, and the campus is beautiful. For example, there are lots of flowers in spring and you can often see small animals in the grass during summer.

제안: 注意语法时态和主谓一致（例如“my school provides”而非“provide”，“accommodation”通常不可数）。回答结构：先给出直接肯定，再用两个具体理由并用连接词衔接。描述时避免模糊表达（如“when you wake”不明确）。

예시: Yes, I think it's a great place to study because the school provides comfortable accommodation and quiet study areas. Also, when I feel tired I can look out at the trees and flowers, which helps me relax and concentrate better.

제안: 注意句子完整和语法（例如“It is far from the city center”而非“it's a far away”）。避免结尾未完成的句子。使用具体描述和连接词（for example, therefore）使表达更连贯，说明哪些季节有何景色。

예시: The environment is peaceful and clean because the campus is far from the city center, so there is little traffic pollution. For example, in spring the grounds are full of blossoms and in autumn the trees turn golden.

제안: 注意用词准确（例如“interest is the guide to study”或“interest guides study”），避免直译式表达（如“generates your some energies”）。先给出观点，再用原因和例子支撑。例子应语法正确并简洁。

예시: I think interest is very important because it motivates you to study and helps you discover your passions. For example, when I was young I loved drawing, which gave me the perseverance to keep practicing and improve my skills.

× My school is in Nanjing, a modern city with a larger population.

✓ My school is in Nanjing, a modern city with a large population.

“larger population”通常用于与另一个城市比较时（更大的）。此处表示一般特征，应使用“large population”（较大的/大的人口）。简体中文解释：这里不需要比较级“larger”，应使用一般形容词“large”。

× It has a modern facilities like restaurants and the hospitals and it has some beautiful views.

✓ It has modern facilities like restaurants and hospitals, and it has some beautiful views.

“a modern facilities”中冠词与复数名词不一致，应去掉不定冠词。“the hospitals”在泛指设施时不需要定冠词，应为“hospitals”。简体中文解释：冠词使用错误，复数名词不能与不定冠词“a”连用；通常谈设施时不用“the”。

× In the spring it has many flowers and in the summer there's many animals in the grassland on my school.

✓ In the spring it has many flowers, and in the summer there are many animals on the grassland at my school.

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用“there are”。介词位置错误，“on my school”应为“at my school”或“on the grounds of my school”。简体中文解释：主谓一致错误（复数用are），以及介词搭配不当，改为“at my school”更自然。

× Definitely my school provide me a convenient accommodations and study areas.

✓ Definitely my school provides me with convenient accommodation and study areas.

主语“my school”是第三人称单数，动词应为“provides”。“a convenient accommodations”冠词与复数不符，应改为不可数“accommodation”或去掉“a”，并在短语中加入介词“with”更自然。简体中文解释：强调主谓一致（第三人称单数动词需加-s）；名词单复数和冠词搭配要一致。

× And when you are tired or you wake, you can look outside the window and you will find some beautiful flowers and green trees outside.

✓ And when you are tired or wake up, you can look out of the window and find some beautiful flowers and green trees outside.

“you wake”不完整，应使用短语“wake up”。“look outside the window”不如“look out of the window”或直接“look out”自然。句中多次出现“outside”显得冗余，去掉一个更好。简体中文解释：动词短语和副词位置不当，使用固定搭配“wake up”“look out of the window”，并避免重复“outside”。

× It may makes me feel relaxed after a long day.

✓ It may make me feel relaxed after a long day.

情态动词“may”后应接动词原形“make”，不能加第三人称单数形式“-s”。简体中文解释：情态动词后动词需用原形，这里将“makes”改为“make”。

× Well, I think is beautiful and clear because it's a far away from the city center so the air is not be polluted by the traffic and my school has blended many flowers and trees.

✓ Well, I think it is beautiful and clean because it's far away from the city center, so the air is not polluted by traffic, and my school is surrounded by many flowers and trees.

缺少主语“it”。“clear”用来描述空气或环境时常用“clean”。“a far away”错误，改为“far away”。“is not be polluted”中动词结构错误，应为“is not polluted”或“isn’t polluted”。“has blended many flowers and trees”表达不自然，改为“is surrounded by many flowers and trees”更符合英语习惯。简体中文解释：句子缺主语、形容词搭配不当、被动语态错误以及短语不自然，需修正为自然表达。

× You can enjoy them in the certain seasons and.

✓ You can enjoy them in certain seasons.

句子末尾多余连词“and”且“the certain seasons”中的定冠词使用不当，改为“in certain seasons”。简体中文解释：句子结构残缺，删去多余的“and”，并去掉不必要的定冠词使表述更自然。

× Well, I think interest is the guider of study because it generates your some energies to promote study and it helps you find what you really want.

✓ Well, I think interest is the guide to study because it generates some energy to promote learning and helps you find what you really want.

“guider”不是常用名词，应该用“guide”。“your some energies”语序和词形错误，应为“some energy”或“your energy”。“promote study”更自然的表达是“promote learning”或“encourage study”。简体中文解释：词汇选择和搭配不当（如用词错误和词序问题），改为更地道的表达。

× For example, when I was young I enjoyed drawing and I have the sense of perseverance to push me to continue do it.

✓ For example, when I was young I enjoyed drawing and I had the sense of perseverance that pushed me to continue doing it.

时态不一致，“when I was young”后应使用过去时“had”。“to continue do it”中不定式后接动名词，正确为“continue doing it”。简体中文解释：时态要一致（过去时），并且动词搭配中“continue”后接动名词形式。