School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意地理描述的准确性与句子流畅性。避免语法错误（如“located at the north of China”应为“in the south of China/ northern China”根据真实位置），并用更自然的表达连接信息。可简化句子，先回答位置，再补充简短描述，避免冗长。

예시: My school is in Dongguan, Guangdong Province, in southern China. It’s a modern and rapidly developing city, so the area around the campus is quite lively.

제안: 注意措辞和连贯性。“not quite large”听起来模棱两可，可用更明确的词（e.g. small, compact）。将两句合并并使用连接词，使回答更自然且不重复。

예시: Yes. I like that my school is fairly compact, so I can walk quickly between classrooms and other facilities without wasting time.

제안: 避免句子过长导致语法错误（如主谓不一致）。先给出观点，再用一到两条具体理由支持，使用连接词（for example, and, which）使逻辑更清晰。细化细节（如图书馆设施、安静程度）。

예시: Yes, I do. The campus is peaceful with many trees and a small lake at the center, which creates a calm atmosphere. For example, the library is spacious and quiet, so students can concentrate on their studies.

제안: 避免重复前面内容，直接描述环境并加入具体细节或例子。注意句子结构完整（如“and is a quite peaceful”应为“and it is quite peaceful”）。使用连接词提升连贯性。

예시: The campus is green and peaceful, with many trees and a central lake. Students often walk around the lake during breaks to relax and clear their minds.

제안: 应先直接回答重要性，然后用更具体的理由或例子支持。避免口语化或模糊表达（如“lazy to finish”可改为“less motivated to complete”）。另外可提及如何培养兴趣作为扩展。

예시: Interest in study is very important because it motivates you to learn and persist. For example, if you enjoy a subject you are more willing to spend time on it and complete assignments; to increase interest, try linking topics to real-life examples or projects.

× My school is in Dongguan City, Guangdong Province, which is located at the north of China and is a modern city which the development is thriving.

✓ My school is in Dongguan City, Guangdong Province, which is located in the north of China and is a modern city where development is thriving.

句中“at the north of China”使用了错误的介词，应使用“in the north of China”表示方位。其次“which the development is thriving”从句结构不正确，应该用关系副词“where”引导，表示“在那个地方发展正在蓬勃”。建议记住表示方位通常用“in”，以及用“where”引导表示地点的从句来说明该地发生的情况。

× Yes, and one thing I like most about my school is that it is not quite large. So basically you can just walk through any places you want to.

✓ Yes, and one thing I like most about my school is that it is not very large. So basically you can just walk through any place you want to.

句中“not quite large”搭配不自然，应改为“not very large”或“not too large”。“any places you want to”中的“places”与“any”后常接单数不可数或用复数但此处语境应为“任何想去的地方”，用单数“any place”更自然。建议多听原生表达，记住固定搭配如“not very large”和“any place”。

× Yes, I think the environment is quite peaceful. You can see a lot of trees and a lake in the center of our school and the library is large and people there study very hard, which provide a good environment to study.

✓ Yes, I think the environment is quite peaceful. You can see a lot of trees and a lake in the center of our school, and the library is large. People there study very hard, which provides a good environment for studying.

原句中“which provide a good environment”的主语是单数短语“the library”或前面整个情况，应使用单数动词“provides”。另外把长句拆开更通顺：“People there study very hard”后用“which provides”指代前面整体情形。最后“environment to study”习惯表达是“environment for studying”。建议注意主谓一致，遇到指代整个句子或单一名词时动词形式应与其一致。

× As I have mentioned, there are many trees and a lake in the center of my school and is a quite peaceful place to go to.

✓ As I have mentioned, there are many trees and a lake in the center of my school, and it is quite a peaceful place to go.

原句在连接并列成分时主语重复或缺失，‘are many trees and a lake ... and is...’结构混乱，应在第二分句加主语‘it’或重构句子以保持完整句子结构。此外“a quite peaceful”词序错误，应为“quite a peaceful”。建议写复合句时检查每个分句是否有主语和谓语，并注意形容词短语的正确顺序。

× Many students take a walk around the lake when they have free time. It can make them feel relaxed.

✓ Many students take walks around the lake when they have free time. It makes them feel relaxed.

第一句“take a walk”可以，但描述习惯性动作时更常用复数“take walks”或保持单数也可。第二句“It can make them feel relaxed”语气不够确定，描述习惯结果用一般现在时“It makes them feel relaxed”更合适。建议在表达常态或习惯时优先使用一般现在时，并保持主句和结果句时态一致。

× I think the interest in study helps us study hard. For example, if you are not interested in a subject, you may be reluctant to study it and lazy to finish the assignment.

✓ I think interest in studying helps us study hard. For example, if you are not interested in a subject, you may be reluctant to study it and unwilling to finish the assignment.

“the interest in study”用法不自然，建议改为“interest in studying”或“interest in a subject”。此外“lazy to finish the assignment”搭配错误，应改为“unwilling to finish the assignment”或“reluctant to finish the assignment”。建议学习固定搭配：interest in doing sth., reluctant/unwilling to do sth.。