Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, completeness and naturalness. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, give one or two brief supporting details, and keep to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences. For example, use 'I did' or 'I had' and add when or why you used the bike. Use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and to the park almost every day. Because my parents lived nearby, I felt safe cycling around the neighborhood.

제안: Work on grammar, clarity and organization. Give a direct opinion using clear subject-verb agreement, then support it with one or two specific reasons or a brief comparison. Use linking words such as 'but', 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. However, bicycles are becoming more common in cities for short trips and among students because they are cheaper and faster in traffic.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'have' (present perfect) is inappropriate here. Change to the simple past 'did' to match the question: 'Yes, I did.' For clarity, the student could also answer 'Yes, I had a bike.' which uses the past simple of 'have.'

× No, usually at my country is a car are also deba uh also popular.

✓ No. Usually cars are also popular in my country.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order ('at my country' should be 'in my country'), wrong article and number ('a car are' mixes singular article with plural verb), redundant filler words and disfluency ('deba uh also'). The corrected sentence uses the correct preposition 'in', plural noun 'cars' to match 'are', and proper word order. Suggestion: remove fillers and plan a concise sentence: 'No. Usually cars are also popular in my country.'