Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban singkat ini benar tetapi terlalu pendek dan tidak memberikan detail. Untuk meningkatkan, mulailah dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik (mis. kapan kamu mendapatkannya, siapa yang memberimu, bagaimana sering dipakai, kenangan terkait). Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika menambahkan informasi.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight as a birthday present from my parents, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood. I especially remember learning to balance with the help of my older brother.

제안: Jawaban sudah relevan tetapi perlu penjelasan lebih rinci dan struktur yang lebih jelas. Mulailah dengan pendapat singkat lalu jelaskan alasan dengan dukungan spesifik (mis. data pengalaman pribadi, kelompok yang sering bersepeda, alasan popularitas seperti biaya atau kemudahan parkir). Gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because', 'for example' atau 'also' untuk koherensi.

예시: Yes, I do, because many people in my city prefer bikes for short commutes. For example, I still cycle to the office most days since it's cheaper and faster than driving in traffic, and I often see students and delivery workers using bikes as well.

× Yes I do because I still use a bike for going to office.

✓ Yes, I do because I still use a bike to go to the office.

The sentence uses present tense but has awkward verb and preposition forms. 'for going to office' is unidiomatic in English. Use the infinitive 'to go' after 'use' when indicating purpose: 'use a bike to go'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'office' since it refers to a specific place (the speaker's workplace). Add a comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.