Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention who gave it or how you used it, and include a brief reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends in the park. Because I practiced every day, I became quite confident cycling on busy streets by the time I was ten.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then provide specific supporting details and linking words to explain why bikes are popular. Mention factors such as transport, culture, infrastructure, or examples to make your response more informative and natural. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., common, widespread, convenient).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting to avoid traffic. In addition, cities have developed bike lanes and rental schemes, so cycling is both convenient and affordable for students and workers.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error: a question requires an answer. Correction provides a short past tense response matching the question (Did you...?). Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' and add details if needed (e.g. 'Yes, I did. I had a small red bike.').

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple tense appropriately to state a general fact. No correction is necessary. Suggestion: you can expand with reasons (e.g. 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and good for short trips.').