Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và động từ), trật tự từ và phát âm một số từ; trả lời nên rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề + 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể; dùng liên từ để mạch lạc; tránh từ lóng như "gotta" trong bài thi. Ví dụ sửa những lỗi: dùng quá khứ cho hành động khi còn nhỏ, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng để mô tả màu sắc và cảm xúc, và nêu thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai dạy bạn, nơi bạn thường đi chơi bằng xe).

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small pink bicycle when I was five; my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I loved it because it gave me freedom to ride around the neighborhood, and my father taught me how to balance and pedal. After that I practiced every day until I felt confident riding on my own.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp (thì, số ít/những), dùng từ chính xác (e.g. "popular", "few", "youngest/children"), tránh mốc thời gian lẫn lộn và nói rõ lý do, đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g. "however", "because", "for example").

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country nowadays. A few years ago cycling was more common, but recently most people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster. However, you can still see some older people and children riding bikes in parks or residential areas, especially during weekends.

× I have a bike when I choose only five years old.

✓ I had a bike when I was only five years old.

The speaker describes a past situation but uses present tense 'have' and incorrect verb 'choose'. Use past tense 'had' and correct past form 'was' for age. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past possession and 'was' for age (I was five years old).

× At that time my parents had buy me a bike with the color pink, and I gotta say that I really like it.

✓ At that time my parents bought me a pink bike, and I have to say that I really liked it.

Incorrect past tense form 'had buy' should be the past simple 'bought'. 'Gotta' is informal; use 'have to' and match tense: since referring to past feelings, use 'liked'. Also 'with the color pink' is wordy; 'a pink bike' is natural. Suggestion: use past simple for completed actions (my parents bought) and consistent past for reactions (I really liked it).

× It's the first time I have some bicycle environment in my life, so I start try to you wish by myself, but it's the first time.

✓ It was the first time I had a bicycle experience in my life, so I started trying to ride by myself, but it was the first time.

Sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrases. Use past 'was' and 'had' for first-time experience. 'Start try to you wish' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'started trying to ride'. Use past continuous/simple 'started trying'. Maintain consistent past tense throughout. Suggestion: simplify to 'It was the first time I had a bicycle experience, so I started trying to ride by myself.'

× No, I don't think so 'cause it's popular maybe in just only five years ago, but nowadays in 2026 or even in 2024, I don't see spike anymore.

✓ No, I don't think so because it was popular maybe only about five years ago, but nowadays, in 2024 or even 2026, I don't see a spike anymore.

Talking about past popularity requires past tense 'was popular'. 'In just only five years ago' is incorrect; use 'about five years ago' or 'only five years ago'. 'I don't see spike' needs an article: 'a spike'. Keep time references consistent and natural. Suggestion: use 'was popular about five years ago' and 'I don't see a spike anymore.'

× It's just a little bit or just small amount.

✓ There are just a few people, or just a small number.

'A little bit' and 'small amount' are vague and uncountable; when referring to people on bikes use countable quantifiers: 'a few' or 'a small number'. Suggestion: choose quantifier matching noun type (countable vs uncountable).

× But I have seen and they use and it's be used by the old people and the smallest.

✓ But I have seen them used by older people and young children.

Pronoun and passive structure errors: 'they use and it's be used' is ungrammatical. 'The old people and the smallest' is wrong; use 'older people' and 'young children' or 'small children'. Suggestion: use 'I have seen them used by older people and young children' or active 'older people and young children use them.'