Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, sentence structure and naturalness. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific detail. Use linking words if adding more info. For example, use "I had" instead of "I have" and avoid repeating time phrases.

예시: I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was five years old, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific. Use plural agreement and give one specific reason or example to support your statement. Use a linking word like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child, when I was five years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, when I was five years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was five').

× Yes, it's popular in our country and most people here use it to go to their work or school.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country and most people here use them to go to work or school.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'are' for agreement. Also, refer to 'bikes' with the plural object pronoun 'them' and say 'go to work or school' without 'their' before 'work' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number with their nouns and simplify common phrases (e.g., 'go to work').