Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce fillers (‘uh’, ‘but’, ‘however’) and correct verb forms (use past tense or present perfect appropriately). Mention a short reason or example (when/why you like cycling) to enrich the answer. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I enjoy cycling now because it keeps me fit and helps me relax after work.

제안: Answer directly, use correct word order and grammar, and add a specific supporting detail with a linking word. Replace vague phrases with concrete reasons (e.g., commuting, cost, traffic). Avoid fillers and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting. For example, bicycles are cheaper than cars and they help riders avoid traffic during rush hour.

× Uh, no, I actually not ride a bike, but uh, however I like uh, cycling if my body fitness and uh, very important for my life.

✓ Uh, no, I actually did not ride a bike, but I like cycling because physical fitness is very important for my life.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'did' for past tense negation and incorrect verb form ('not ride' should be 'did not ride'); awkward conjunctions and sentence fragments; incorrect noun phrase 'my body fitness' and missing linking verb before 'very important'. Suggestion: Use the past simple with 'did not' for negation of a past habit ('did not ride'), remove redundant fillers ('uh, however'), and use a clear causal clause: 'I like cycling because physical fitness is very important for my life.' Replace 'my body fitness' with 'physical fitness' and include the linking verb 'is'.

× Of course, I think a bike in popular in my country due to many people use daily life bike and quick uh.

✓ Of course, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use bikes in daily life and they are quick.

Errors: incorrect article and word order 'a bike in popular' should be plural 'bikes are popular' (subject-verb agreement and article misuse); missing prepositions and awkward phrase 'use daily life bike' — needs 'use bikes in daily life'; vague 'quick uh' needs completion 'they are quick'. Suggestion: Use plural 'bikes' with verb 'are', includepreposition 'in' for 'in daily life', and finish adjective clause 'they are quick' for clarity.