Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Habla con mayor claridad y corrige errores de gramática y repetición. Enfócate en una estructura simple: respuesta directa, seguida de una razón clara y concisa. Evita repeticiones (por ejemplo “I no I didn’t”, “being hurt getting hurt”) y usa vocabulario preciso como “scared of falling” o “afraid of falling off”. Mantén la respuesta dentro de 2–4 oraciones y emplea un conector si das un detalle adicional.

예시: No, I didn't. I never asked for one because I was afraid of falling off and getting hurt. As a result, my parents never bought me a bike.

제안: Mejora la gramática (persona y número), reduce las repeticiones y usa conectores para coherencia. Por ejemplo, evita “every child have one” (debe ser “every child has one”) y frases redundantes como “playing in the bikes”. Añade detalles específicos (por ejemplo, dónde suelen usarlas o por qué son populares) para enriquecer la respuesta y usa 2–4 oraciones claramente conectadas.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. Almost every child has one and they often ride them in parks or on quiet streets. Because they are affordable and fun, many parents buy bikes as Christmas gifts.

× No, I no I didn't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The sentence contains a redundant pronoun and repetition ('I no I didn't'). Remove the extra words to form a grammatically correct negative past response: 'No, I didn't.' This fixes the pronoun/repetition error and makes the sentence concise. Suggestion: Say 'No, I didn't.' or 'No, I didn't have one.' depending on context.

× I never wanted one because I was so afraid to fall in love and being hurt getting hurt, so I never asked for one.

✓ I never wanted one because I was so afraid of falling and getting hurt, so I never asked for one.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'afraid to fall in love' (wrong meaning) and faulty verb forms 'being hurt getting hurt' are awkward/redundant. Use the adjective 'afraid of' followed by the gerund 'falling' to express fear of falling. Use 'getting hurt' for passive experience. Suggestion: Use 'afraid of falling and getting hurt' or 'afraid of falling and being hurt.' Keep parallel gerund forms.

× Almost every child have one and everyone love it.

✓ Almost every child has one and everyone loves it.

'Every' makes the noun singular, so the verb must be singular: 'has' not 'have.' Also 'everyone' is singular and requires 'loves' rather than 'love.' Suggestion: Match singular subjects with singular verbs: 'every child has' and 'everyone loves.'

× I think it's so nice to see them playing in the bikes, riding bikes and having fun together.

✓ I think it's so nice to see them playing on the bikes, riding bikes and having fun together.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'play/ride a bike' rather than 'in.' 'Playing on the bikes' or simply 'playing, riding bikes, and having fun together' are correct. Suggestion: Use 'on' for bicycles: 'playing on the bikes' or 'riding bikes.'

× They always ask for one as a as a Christmas gift.

✓ They always ask for one as a Christmas gift.

The phrase repeats 'as a' twice, creating redundancy. Remove the extra 'as a' to correct sentence structure. Suggestion: Say 'ask for one as a Christmas gift' or 'ask for one for Christmas.'