Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep answers clear and direct. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and grammatical mistakes (use past simple for completed actions). Also use precise vocabulary for actions (e.g., ride, fall) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I wasn’t very good at riding because I struggled with balance. Once I tried to learn properly, but I fell several times and eventually stopped practicing.

제안: Give a clear opinion followed by specific reasons and link them smoothly. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use plural forms and natural connectors (for example, because, since, and, therefore). Mention concrete facts or examples to support your view.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Korea because many people own them and cities have dedicated bike lanes. For example, in my neighborhood almost every family has at least one bicycle, and the separated cycle paths make riding convenient and safe.

× Yes, I did when I was young that I had a bike.

✓ Yes, I did; when I was young, I had a bike.

The original sentence is awkward and mixes auxiliary past 'did' with a past clause redundantly. Use either 'Yes, I did' alone as a short answer or combine with a clear past clause: 'when I was young, I had a bike.' Add a comma after the introductory time phrase and a semicolon or conjunction if keeping both parts.

× But I'm not great though bike 'cause uh, 'cause I'm not good at exercise and the balancing something.

✓ But I'm not great at riding a bike because I'm not good at exercising and balancing.

Problems: incorrect adjective usage 'great though bike', missing preposition 'at' with 'great', redundant filler 'cause', and awkward noun phrase 'the balancing something.' Use 'great at riding a bike', 'because' once, 'exercising' (gerund) and 'balancing' as parallel gerunds. This corrects word choice and forms.

× So one day I've tried to write it the bike, but I boiling down the after then I gave up.

✓ So one day I tried to ride the bike, but I fell off it, and then I gave up.

Errors: incorrect use of present perfect 'I've tried' should be simple past 'I tried' for a finished event; 'write' is wrong verb, should be 'ride'; 'boiling down the' is incorrect phrase for falling; word order and conjunctions are wrong. Use simple past for sequence: 'I tried', 'I fell off', 'then I gave up.'

× Yes, I believe the bike is very popular in my country Korea cause of the, the, the whoever I know has bike bike everybody and uh, we have the special road for the bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country, Korea, because everyone I know has a bike, and we have special bike lanes.

Multiple issues: subject-verb/number agreement — 'the bike is very popular' should be plural 'bikes are very popular' when speaking generally; 'whoever I know has bike bike everybody' is ungrammatical—use 'everyone I know has a bike.' 'Cause' should be 'because.' 'Special road for the bike' is better as 'special bike lanes.' This fixes plurality, pronoun usage, and phrasing.

× That's why I thought the bike is very popular in Korea.

✓ That's why I think bikes are very popular in Korea.

Tense mismatch and article/number issue: 'I thought' (past) contradicts present general statement—use present 'I think' to express current belief. Also use plural 'bikes' for a general statement. This aligns tense with the question about current popularity.