Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Pronunciation, grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Start with a clear topic sentence, use the correct tense (past simple) and avoid repetition. Keep answers concise (≤5 sentences). Add one or two specific details using linking words (for example, why it was special or a memory).

예시: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bright red bike when I was seven, and it was very special because I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because I practiced every day, I became confident and used it to visit friends after school.

제안: Work on grammar, word choice and sentence linking. Use correct noun forms and articles (e.g., “bikes” not “bikey”), and form full sentences with a topic sentence plus a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to school or to work, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

× Yeah, I have. I have a. Bike and I'm child where my father gave me a bike that is special for me, that was special for me.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child that my father gave me; it was very special to me.

The student mixed present and past tense and used incorrect sentence structure. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the correct tense is past simple (did/had/was). 'I have' is present and incorrect here. 'I'm child' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'I was a child.' Redundant phrases 'that is special for me' and 'that was special for me' should be combined into one past description: 'it was very special to me.' Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past events: 'I did' for 'Did you have...?', 'I had a bike', 'I was a child', 'it was special to me.'

× Yeah, in my country bikey is the most popular vehicle.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are the most popular vehicles.

The student used a nonstandard form 'bikey' and singular noun with 'is' where plural is needed. The intended noun is 'bikes' (plural), and when referring generally to a category, use plural noun and plural verb 'are.' Also 'vehicle' should be plural to match plural subject. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and subject-verb agreement: 'bikes are the most popular vehicles.'

× Most of people riding bike for go home, go school and office.

✓ Most people ride bikes to go home, to go to school, and to go to the office.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'Most of people' should be 'Most people' (article misuse), 'riding bike' incorrectly uses a participle phrase where simple present is required for habitual actions, 'for go home' is incorrect preposition and verb form. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'Most people ride bikes.' Use 'to' plus base verb for purpose: 'to go home,' and include articles for institutions: 'to school' and 'to the office.' Suggestion: Use 'Most people ride bikes to go home, to go to school, and to go to the office.'