Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and accurate in tense, give a brief supporting detail, and avoid one-word answer. Use a topic sentence in past tense and add one or two specific details to make the response natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I rode it to my friend’s house every weekend.

제안: Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples using linking phrases (for example, moreover, because) to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them to go to the market and students ride them to school because they are cheap and easy to park.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past ("when you were a child"), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense and inappropriate here; 'did' correctly indicates a past possession in response to 'Did you have a bike...'. Use past-tense auxiliary verbs when referring to past events.

× Yes, it's very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The pronoun 'it' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun. Use 'they' to refer to plural nouns. Also match the verb 'are' for plural subjects.

× We are using it for going to the market and also for going to school.

✓ We use them to go to the market and to go to school.

Several issues: 1) 'are using' (present continuous) suggests an action happening now; general habits should use present simple ('use'). 2) 'it' is singular while 'bikes' is plural; use 'them'. 3) 'for going to' is unnatural; use the infinitive 'to go to' for purpose. Combined, the corrected sentence uses present simple, correct plural pronoun, and proper infinitive form for purpose.