Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and natural but too brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence (you already have one), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word (for example, "because" or "so") to explain why you didn't have a bike or what you did instead. Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "afford", "shared", "public transport").

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Because my family lived in a crowded city, we relied on public buses, so my parents didn't buy one for me. Instead, I usually walked to school or shared a ride with neighbors.

제안: Your answer is relevant but somewhat awkward and lacks detail. Improve by using a clearer topic sentence and adding specific supporting information with linking words (for instance, "because" or "for example"). Provide examples or reasons (e.g., commuting, exercise, environmental concerns) and avoid redundant words like "in the roads"—say "on the roads" or "for commuting."

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in big cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycling to work or school.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is already correct. The student used the past simple negative 'didn't have' appropriately to describe a past situation. No change needed.

× Yes, I think in my country bikes are very popular in the roads.

✓ Yes, I think in my country bikes are very popular on the roads.

The error is the choice of preposition. We use 'on the roads' to talk about vehicles or bicycles being commonly seen or used along roadways. Using 'in the roads' is incorrect because 'in' implies being inside something rather than on its surface. Suggestion: use 'on the roads' or simply 'in my country' without 'the roads' (e.g., 'bikes are very popular in my country').