Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar (past tense and possession), and add a clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Use linking words like "but" and "so" correctly. Avoid redundancy and keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: I didn't have my own bike as a child, but I often borrowed my brother's bike. My parents had bought it for him, so I practised riding it around the neighbourhood every weekend until I felt confident.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence. Fix grammar (subject–verb agreement, word choice) and pronunciation errors (e.g. "bikes"). Give one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g. "because", "for example"). Keep answers concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips like going to the shop or commuting within their neighbourhood, so cycling is a common and practical choice.

× No, I didn't have my own bike, but I often borrow my brother's bike that our parents bought it for him and I used to ride it around my neighborhood and practice every weekend until I became confident.

✓ No, I didn't have my own bike, but I often borrowed my brother's bike that our parents bought for him, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood and practice every weekend until I became confident.

Mixed past tense forms: 'didn't have' is past, but 'borrow' is present; change 'borrow' to 'borrowed' to match past context. Also remove redundant object 'it' after 'bought' (use 'bought for him'). Use a comma before 'and' to separate clauses for clarity.

× Yes, but it's a very popular country because it is affordable to buy and it is environmental friendly.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable to buy and environmentally friendly.

Sentence is unclear and uses incorrect adjective forms and reference: 'it's a very popular country' is wrong because the intended subject is 'bicycles'; use plural 'bicycles are'. 'Environmental friendly' should be the adverbial adjective 'environmentally friendly'. Match plurality and correct adjective form.

× If we want to go to small distances around our neighborhood or any to buy groceries, bites are very, uh, bites.

✓ For short distances around our neighborhood or when we want to buy groceries, bicycles are very convenient.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains fragmentation and repeated words ('bites'). Replace with a coherent structure: 'For short distances... or when we want to buy groceries' and use appropriate adjective 'convenient' to express usefulness. Also correct 'bites' to 'bicycles'.

× We use bites are very often off. We use oftenly bites.

✓ We use bicycles very often.

Remove redundant and incorrect words. 'Oftenly' is not a word; 'often' is the correct adverb. The phrase 'We use bicycles very often' is concise and grammatically correct.