Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Directly answer in the past tense and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use a clear topic sentence, then briefly elaborate using linking words if needed. For example, say when you had it and a short memory or purpose to enrich the response.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was a second‑hand bike my parents bought for me, and I learned to ride it in the park near our home. I used it almost every day to visit friends and run small errands.

제안: Provide a clearer, more specific answer using linking words and relevant vocabulary. State your main idea, then give 1–2 concrete reasons or examples (e.g. commuting, low cost, culture) and finish with a short consequence or comparison. Avoid vague phrases like “covered instance” and filler words.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and avoid traffic. For example, students and market vendors often ride bicycles to save money and parking hassles. As a result, cycling remains a common and practical mode of transport in both cities and rural areas.

× Yes, I have a bike. Uh.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'have' is inconsistent with the time reference. Suggestion: use past simple 'had' to match 'when you were a child'.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because we use bike for riding also, uh, we use bike for covered instance etcetera.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because we use bikes for riding and for short journeys, for example.

There are multiple issues: countable noun and plural agreement (use 'bikes' not 'bike'), conjunction and list clarity (use 'and' rather than 'also, uh,'), and awkward phrase 'covered instance' which is incorrect. These relate to noun number and sentence structure but must follow allowed types; primary corrections here are plural form and word choice. Use plural 'bikes' to agree with 'we use' and to match general statements. Replace 'covered instance etcetera' with a clear example phrase like 'for short journeys, for example' to convey meaning. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal answer. Suggestion: use 'bikes' consistently and link ideas with 'and' or 'and for'.