Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Give a direct answer (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep responses natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and around the neighborhood. Because I practiced every day, I became confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., because, so, for example). Avoid minor grammar errors and vague terms. Use correct plural forms and more precise vocabulary to sound natural and effective.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Because many people cannot afford cars, they rely on bicycles for daily travel, and as a result cities are full of cyclists during rush hour. For example, students and market vendors often use bikes to commute short distances and carry goods.

× Many peoples cannot afford cars, so they usually use bikes.

✓ Many people cannot afford cars, so they usually use bikes.

The noun 'people' is already plural and does not take an additional plural marker. 'Peoples' refers to distinct ethnic groups or nations, which is not intended here. Use 'people' when referring to multiple individuals. Suggestion: replace 'peoples' with 'people'. This keeps subject-verb agreement correct and matches the intended meaning.'