Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng cấu trúc chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp từ. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi nêu thêm một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ với liên từ hợp lý (e.g., when, so, therefore). Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about seven, and I often cycled to school with my friends. Riding a bike helped me gain confidence and stay active.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No/Not really), tiếp theo giải thích cụ thể với lý do và ví dụ; dùng từ đúng (e.g., car, motorbike) và liên từ (because, so) để mạch lạc. Giữ 2-4 câu.

예시: Not really; bicycles are not very popular in my country nowadays. Most people prefer cars and motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. However, some people use bikes in parks or for exercise.

× There's in a part I learn to ride a bike and I go to school by bicycle.

✓ There was a period when I learned to ride a bike, and I went to school by bicycle.

The original sentence misuses 'There's' (contraction of there is) and mixes tenses. Use 'There was a period' (correct 'there be' and noun phrase) and past tense verbs 'learned' and 'went' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use 'There was a period when...' to introduce a past situation, and keep verbs in past simple for completed actions. Note: Explanation provided in English as requested.

× In my opinion, I think by not popular in my countries because right now. Call and motorbike is very popular.

✓ In my opinion, bicycles are not very popular in my country right now. Cars and motorbikes are very popular.

Multiple errors: incorrect word order 'by not popular' and wrong plural/singular forms. Use 'bicycles are not very popular' (subject-verb agreement and correct adjective placement). 'My countries' should be 'my country' unless referring to multiple countries. 'Call' is a typo for 'car(s)'. Use plural 'cars and motorbikes are' to match plural subject. Suggestion: state the subject ('bicycles') first, then the verb 'are', and use consistent plurality for items being compared.