Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音や流暢さを改善し、文法を正しく使うことに集中してください。現在の回答は過去の経験について話しているので時制は過去形に統一する必要があります（例：I usually went → I often went）。繰り返しやためらい（uh, by by）を減らし、具体的な詳細（何歳の時、どれくらいの頻度で、誰と行ったかなど）を1〜2文で付け加えるとより自然で説得力が増します。短い回答でも、トピック文→支持文の構成を守り、リンク語（for example, often, when I was）を使ってつなぎましょう。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often rode my bicycle to the local library, usually two or three times a week. I started cycling around age seven and sometimes went with my older brother, which made the trips more enjoyable.

제안: あいまいな表現や繰り返しを避け、具体例や理由を加えて意見を裏付けてください。現在形で一般的な事実を述べるのは正しいですが、'I always see' は根拠として弱いので、統計や場所、時間帯など具体的な観察を示すと説得力が増します。また、ためらい語（umm）や語の繰り返しを減らし、接続語（for example, especially, because）で文をつなげてください。

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see many people cycling to work or school, especially in the mornings, and many cities have dedicated bike lanes which encourage cycling.

× Yes, I did uh, when I was a child. I usually go to the library by by bicycle. Bicycle.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I usually went to the library by bicycle.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The student begins with past 'I did' and refers to 'when I was a child', so the habitual action should be in the past tense 'usually went' rather than present 'go'. Also remove stuttering/repetition and add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: keep tense consistent by using past simple for past habits and avoid fillers/repetitions.

× Yes, I think so because umm, I always see that many people ride ride the bike.

✓ Yes, I think so because I often see many people riding bikes.

The original contains repetition 'ride ride' and mixes verb forms. 'Always see that many people ride the bike' is awkward: use 'often' or 'always' depending on intended frequency and use the -ing form 'riding' after 'see' when describing people engaged in an activity. Also 'the bike' is incorrect as a general plural reference; use 'bikes'. Suggestion: remove hesitation and repetitions, choose appropriate frequency adverb, use 'see' + -ing for observed ongoing actions, and use plural for general statements.