Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ข้อเสนอแนะ: แก้ไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น การใช้กาล (past tense) และคำศัพท์ผิดหลายคำ ควรตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วเสริมรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ (ไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค) และใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างง่ายเมื่อให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติม

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a birthday present, and my mother helped me learn how to ride it in the park. I used to ride it to visit friends and explore the neighborhood on weekends.

제안: ข้อเสนอแนะ: ปรับคำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'bikes' และใช้โครงสร้างเหตุผลให้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น ควรให้รายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ผลกระทบของสภาพอากาศและมลพิษต่อการใช้งานจักรยาน และอาจเปรียบเทียบกับการใช้ยานพาหนะอื่นๆ

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Because the climate is often extremely hot and air pollution can be severe, many people prefer using cars or motorbikes. As a result, cycling is more common in parks or for leisure rather than daily commuting.

× Of course, when I was young, I have one bite of my father buy it for me and my mother teach me how to buy.

✓ Of course, when I was young, I had a bike because my father bought it for me and my mother taught me how to ride it.

The sentence mixes past context ('when I was young') with present tense verbs ('have', 'buy', 'teach'). Use past simple for completed actions in the past: 'had', 'bought', 'taught'. Also 'bite' is a spelling error; the correct noun is 'bike'. 'How to buy' is incorrect in meaning here; the intended meaning is learning the action of using the bike, so use 'how to ride it'. Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense for past events, check verb forms, and replace 'buy' with 'bought' and 'teach' with 'taught'.

× I think by are not popular in my country because the weather is too hot and is a lot of pollution.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country because the weather is too hot and there is a lot of pollution.

The original has several problems: 'by' is a typo for 'bikes'; 'are' should match plural 'bikes' which is correct after fixing typo; the clause 'is a lot of pollution' is missing the dummy subject 'there' for existence and should be 'there is a lot of pollution'. Use 'there is' for singular uncountable noun 'a lot of pollution'. Suggestions: fix typos, ensure subject and verb agree, and use 'there is' or 'there are' when stating existence of something.