T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

예시: I often wear T-shirts, especially when I go outside because they are comfortable and suitable for warm weather.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons. Also, avoid unnecessary words and ensure your sentences are complete and clear.

예시: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are inexpensive and very comfortable. For example, I like wearing them during hot weather as they help me stay cool while doing my chores.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, try to provide more specific details or examples to support your opinion.

예시: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country because they prefer loose and comfortable clothing. For instance, many seniors choose T-shirts for casual outings due to their simplicity and ease of wear.

제안: Your answer has some good points but contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid irrelevant information.

예시: No, I did not usually wear T-shirts as a child because my mom, who is a tailor, often made my clothes from cotton fabric, which was very popular and comfortable.

× Will I often wear T-shirts?

✓ Do I often wear T-shirts?

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Will' to ask about a habitual action. 'Will' is used for future tense, but here the question is about frequency, so 'Do' is appropriate.

× But that makes me quite comfort table.

✓ But that makes me quite comfortable.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe a feeling of ease.

× When would I go outside?

✓ When do I go outside?

The use of 'would' is incorrect here; the question is about habitual action, so 'do' is the correct auxiliary verb.

× I used to wear T-shirts.

✓ I used to wear T-shirts.

This sentence is correct as it expresses a past habitual action using 'used to'.

× Yes, I often buy T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts.

This sentence is correct; the adverb 'often' is correctly placed before the main verb.

× It is cheap to buy and very comfortable to wear.

✓ They are cheap to buy and very comfortable to wear.

The subject 'T-shirts' is plural, so the pronoun and verb should be plural ('They are').

× Whenever I wear in hot weather it is.

✓ Whenever I wear them in hot weather, it is comfortable.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'them' referring to T-shirts; also, the phrase 'it is' is vague and needs clarification.

× It makes me comfort table and I can do my chores Val.

✓ It makes me comfortable and I can do my chores well.

'Comfort table' should be 'comfortable'; 'Val' is likely a misspelling of 'well'.

× Well T-shirts are most fashionable in my country for older people because older people love to wear loose clothes and T-shirts are the best example for it.

✓ Well, T-shirts are the most fashionable in my country for older people because older people love to wear loose clothes, and T-shirts are the best example of this.

Added commas for clarity; 'most fashionable' requires 'the'; 'example for it' should be 'example of this'.

× No, I did not usually wear T-shirts when I was a kid.

✓ No, I did not usually wear T-shirts when I was a kid.

This sentence is correct; it uses past tense appropriately.

× My mom is a trailer.

✓ My mom is a tailor.

The word 'trailer' is incorrect; the correct word is 'tailor', meaning someone who makes clothes.

× She often made clothes for me of by using fab cotton fabric which is very popular and comfort table in my car.

✓ She often made clothes for me by using cotton fabric, which is very popular and comfortable in my area.

The phrase 'of by using' is incorrect; 'fab' should be 'cotton'; 'comfort table' should be 'comfortable'; 'in my car' is likely a mistake and replaced with 'in my area' for context.