T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "more comfort table" instead of "more comfortable" and "other clouds" instead of "other clothes." Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar to make your answer sound more natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts every day, whether I am going to work or college. I prefer them because they are more comfortable than other types of clothing.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "becaused," "do visited," and "on this counts." To improve, use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, try to organize your answer logically with linking words to make it easier to follow.

예시: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I enjoy shopping. Whenever I have free time after work, I visit the shopping center to look for T-shirts, especially when they are on sale.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect word choices and unclear sentences, such as "via T-shirts," "too hott becaused," and "cloth that is weird at home ready." To improve, use simpler and clearer language, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: I don't think T-shirts are very fashionable for older people in my country. Usually, they wear T-shirts only when the weather is very hot because they are made of light material and are comfortable at home.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "used to be a clots" and "she was to put me that on." To improve, try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. You can also add a simple supporting detail to enrich your answer.

예시: I don't remember clearly, but my mom told me that I used to wear T-shirts regularly when I was a kid.

× I always prefer wearing T-shirts because they are more comfort table than other clouds.

✓ I always prefer wearing T-shirts because they are more comfortable than other clothes.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, 'clouds' is a misspelling of 'clothes'. Use 'comfortable' to describe how pleasant the T-shirts are to wear.

× Every week becaused whenever I get time to go to shopping center after my work, I do visited there and I go for checking out the T-shirts, especially when they are on this counts I buy them.

✓ Every week, because whenever I get time to go to the shopping center after my work, I visit there and check out the T-shirts, especially when they are on discount, I buy them.

The phrase 'do visited' is incorrect; the correct form is 'visit' in present tense to match 'whenever I get time'. Also, 'on this counts' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'on discount'. The sentence is corrected to present tense to reflect habitual action.

× Usually people in my home country via T-shirts when it is too hott becaused they are made-up of. Pin stuff and moreover it is usually a cloth that is weird at home ready.

✓ Usually people in my home country wear T-shirts when it is too hot because they are made of thin stuff, and moreover, it is usually a cloth that is comfortable at home.

The word 'via' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'wear'. 'Hott' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'hot'. 'Becaused' should be 'because'. 'Made-up of' should be 'made of'. 'Pin stuff' is likely 'thin stuff'. The phrase 'weird at home ready' is unclear and corrected to 'comfortable at home' to make sense.

× I don't have enough knowledge because I don't remember how I used to be a clots when I was kid but he is.

✓ I don't have enough knowledge because I don't remember how I used to be clothed when I was a kid, but he is.

The phrase 'used to be a clots' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'used to be clothed'. Also, 'when I was kid' should be 'when I was a kid'. The sentence is corrected to proper past tense and article usage.

× My mom used to tell me that. I got some of the T-shirts and she was to put me that on regular basis.

✓ My mom used to tell me that I got some of the T-shirts and she used to put them on me on a regular basis.

The phrase 'she was to put me that' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'she used to put them on me'. Also, 'on regular basis' should be 'on a regular basis'. The sentence is corrected to proper past tense and pronoun usage.