T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'T-shirts' multiple times, you can use pronouns or synonyms. Also, focus on sentence structure to improve clarity.

예시: I often wear T-shirts, especially during the summer because the weather is quite hot. I prefer bright-coloured T-shirts with interesting texts or pictures, as they make my outfit more attractive. Additionally, I like cotton fabric since it is very comfortable and breathable in warm weather.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on answering directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and correct brand names. Avoid unnecessary words and try to explain your preferences with reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I often buy T-shirts from different brands such as Tommy Hilfiger, Guess, and Gucci. I enjoy shopping and like to have a variety of styles in my wardrobe.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Be specific about why older people prefer T-shirts and mention the styles or comfort aspects clearly.

예시: In my country, T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people because they find them very comfortable, especially during the hot summer season. Moreover, they appreciate the variety of styles available, which allows them to choose according to their taste.

제안: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to use correct tenses and avoid repeating words. Provide clear supporting details and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts during my childhood. I had many brightly coloured T-shirts with cartoon prints, which I really loved. Also, my father used to choose all my T-shirts for me.

× I often wear T-shirt, specially during the summer because the T-shirts.

✓ I often wear T-shirts, especially during the summer because of the heat.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match the context of wearing them regularly. Also, 'specially' is incorrect here; 'especially' is the correct adverb. The phrase 'because the T-shirts' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'because of the heat' to explain why T-shirts are worn in summer.

× Better is quite hot.

✓ The weather is quite hot.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Better' is misplaced and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely to describe the weather, so 'The weather is quite hot' is the correct form.

× I prefer bright colored T-shirt with interesting text or pictures.

✓ I prefer bright coloured T-shirts with interesting text or pictures.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match the general preference. Also, 'colored' should be 'coloured' in Canadian English spelling.

× I like cotton fabric since it is very comfort table and breathable in warm weather.

✓ I like cotton fabric since it is very comfortable and breathable in warm weather.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe the fabric.

× Are your phone by T-shirts from different brands like from Tommy, like from Gas? Guess Gucci Another.

✓ I often buy T-shirts from different brands like Tommy, Gas, Gucci, and others.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Are your phone by' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'I often buy'. The brand names should be listed clearly and correctly.

× I am out shopping person and I love to buy.

✓ I am an outgoing person and I love to shop.

'Out shopping person' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'outgoing person'. Also, 'love to buy' is better expressed as 'love to shop' in this context.

× In my country T-shirts are quite fashionable for older people because they always preferred to wear T-shirts as their their very comfort table too weird specially during the hot summer season and also they are loved the stuff of the different styles of T-shirts so.

✓ In my country, T-shirts are quite fashionable for older people because they always prefer to wear T-shirts as they are very comfortable, especially during the hot summer season, and they also love the variety of different styles of T-shirts.

Multiple issues: 'preferred' should be present tense 'prefer' to match the context; 'comfort table' should be 'comfortable'; 'too weird' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; 'loved the stuff of the different styles' is ungrammatical and should be 'love the variety of different styles'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I used to wear T-shirts where in my childhood as I I have a different brighten colors T-shirts and there are so many cartoons printed on the T-shirts which I really love and also all the T-shirts were chosen by my father and they loved.

✓ Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was a child. I had different bright coloured T-shirts with many cartoons printed on them, which I really loved. Also, all the T-shirts were chosen by my father, and he loved them.

'Where in my childhood' should be 'when I was a child'. 'I have' should be past tense 'I had'. 'Brighten colors' should be 'bright coloured' (Canadian spelling). 'They loved' is unclear; likely refers to the father, so 'he loved them' is correct. The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.