T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence about how often you wear T-shirts. Use simple, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, provide specific details with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts several times a week because they are comfortable and suitable for the warm weather. For example, I prefer light-colored cotton T-shirts as they keep me cool and feel soft on my skin.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to explain why you buy T-shirts often, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are more comfortable and versatile than other types of clothing. For instance, I can easily match them with jeans or shorts for casual outings.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to answer directly about the fashion of T-shirts among older people in your country. Use clear sentences and provide specific examples or comparisons with linking words.

예시: In my country, many older people like to wear T-shirts, especially those with bright colors and printed designs. However, some older men prefer plain T-shirts because they find them more comfortable and simple.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about wearing T-shirts as a child. Use linking words to add specific details about the types or colors you liked.

예시: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. I liked bright colors such as red and blue-green, and I often chose T-shirts with prints of leaves and fruits because they looked fun and cheerful.

× I I must give you the cotton T-shirt because it's the very effective and comfort table cloth for me.

✓ I must give you the cotton T-shirt because it's very effective and comfortable for me.

The adjective 'comfort' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective form is 'comfortable'. Also, 'the very effective' should be 'very effective' without 'the' to correctly modify the noun phrase.

× I mostly prefer to a light color cotton T-shirt.

✓ I mostly prefer a light-coloured cotton T-shirt.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'prefer'. Also, 'light color' should be hyphenated as 'light-coloured' to correctly describe the T-shirt.

× Yes, I usually buy T-shirts then other than the fashionable tough because T-shirts are more compatible than other clothes and I can work with the with the clothes.

✓ Yes, I usually buy T-shirts rather than fashionable ones because T-shirts are more comfortable than other clothes and I can work with them.

The conjunction 'then' is incorrect here; 'rather than' is appropriate for comparison. 'Tough' is likely a misused word; 'comfortable' fits better. Also, 'work with the with the clothes' is redundant and unclear; 'work with them' is correct.

× In my country in the most old people like Kim and where the T-shirts and a bright colors and printer T-shirts compared to the junk store and and the the men they don't fear the often teachers.

✓ In my country, most old people like Kim wear T-shirts in bright colors and printed designs compared to those from junk stores, and the men are not afraid to wear T-shirts often.

There are multiple singular/plural errors: 'the most old people' should be 'most old people'; 'a bright colors' should be 'bright colors'; 'printer T-shirts' should be 'printed T-shirts'. Also, sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Yes I will. I bought them any type of T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I did. I bought all types of T-shirts.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used to indicate past action; 'did' is correct. 'Any type of T-shirts' is incorrect; 'all types of T-shirts' is appropriate.

× When I vist gate I for some bright colors like red, blue-green and different type color painting with the some leaves and some fruits.

✓ When I visited the gate, I chose some bright colors like red, blue-green, and different types of color patterns with some leaves and fruits.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'vist gate' should be 'visited the gate'; 'I for some' is incomplete and unclear; 'different type color painting' should be 'different types of color patterns'; 'the some leaves' should be 'some leaves'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.