T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make it more natural and coherent. Try to avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise within five sentences.

예시: I seldom wear T-shirts because my workplace requires smart casual attire, which doesn't allow them. However, I do enjoy wearing T-shirts during my free time as they are comfortable and casual.

제안: Your answer is good but could be more natural by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating similar information and add a little more specific detail to enrich your response.

예시: No, I rarely buy T-shirts because my company enforces a strict dress code that prohibits casual clothing. Although I find T-shirts comfortable and convenient, I seldom have the chance to wear them at work or formal events.

제안: Your answer needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to make it coherent. Also, be more specific and avoid repetition or errors.

예시: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country, especially those featuring popular icons or phrases. Sometimes, older individuals buy T-shirts with trending designs to stay stylish and express their personality.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. To improve, use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and linking words to explain your point more effectively and naturally.

예시: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid because there were fewer restrictions on dress codes for children. I could wear whatever I liked, which made me feel comfortable and free.

× I don't have much opportunities to wear them.

✓ I don't have many opportunities to wear them.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'opportunities'. Therefore, 'many' is the correct choice here.

× T-shirts are fashionable in a way that they can have many icons or phrases written on AT shirt.

✓ T-shirts are fashionable in a way that they can have many icons or phrases written on a shirt.

The preposition 'on' should be followed by the article 'a' (not capitalized 'AT') before the noun 'shirt'. The incorrect capitalization and article usage make the sentence ungrammatical.

× Sometime older people they they buy clothes with trending icon.

✓ Sometimes older people buy clothes with trending icons.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'they they' and lacks plural agreement in 'icon'. Also, 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and corrects plural forms.

× Yes, I want T-shirts when I was a kid because as a child there is not many restriction on the stress code.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid because as a child there were not many restrictions on the dress code.

The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wore' to match the past time frame. Also, 'there is' should be 'there were' to agree with plural 'restrictions' in past tense. 'Stress code' is a typo and should be 'dress code'.