T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like 'to wearing'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of listing prints abruptly, you could say 'such as floral patterns and rustic designs'.

예시: I often wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable, especially in warm weather. I have a large collection, including floral patterns and rustic designs. Moreover, some T-shirts I bought during my travels are special to me, which makes wearing them even more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Avoid repeating phrases like 'some small collection' and incomplete sentences like 'for me and my'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details. Also, try to use more natural expressions like 'when I have money' instead of 'when I have my money'.

예시: Yes, I often buy T-shirts when I go to the supermarket. I usually choose ones with beautiful designs, such as rustic patterns or anime characters. Whenever I have some money saved, I like to buy T-shirts for myself and sometimes for my family.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'tradition customer' and incomplete ending. Try to use correct grammar and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples. For instance, explain what kind of religious symbols and how they relate to culture.

예시: Older people in my country often wear T-shirts featuring unique prints inspired by traditional culture. Many designs include religious symbols, which help them feel connected to their faith. Therefore, they prefer these T-shirts as a way to express their culture and spirituality.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes such as 'wear' instead of 'wore', repeated words, and awkward phrases like 'I love to wearing T-shirts in my child'. Try to use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear, specific details.

예시: When I was a child, I often wore T-shirts because my mother used to buy them for me and my sister. We usually wore matching T-shirts to birthday parties and other events, which made us stand out and people often noticed us. I really enjoyed wearing them because they were comfortable and colorful.

× Some of my T-shirts are unique ones that I bought during my travel which make them special to me and I feel very comfortable to wearing T-shirts with different kinds of things like.

✓ Some of my T-shirts are unique ones that I bought during my travel which make them special to me and I feel very comfortable wearing T-shirts with different kinds of things like.

The phrase 'to wearing' is incorrect because after 'feel comfortable', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. The correct form is 'feel comfortable wearing'.

× Yes, I often buy T-shirts when I go to supermarket.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts when I go to the supermarket.

The noun 'supermarket' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'supermarket' is incorrect in this context.

× I usually buy some small collection of T-shirts with beautiful designs such as rustic designs and some anime animations, cartoons or some extra designs.

✓ I usually buy a small collection of T-shirts with beautiful designs such as rustic designs and some anime animations, cartoons or some extra designs.

The phrase 'some small collection' is incorrect because 'collection' is a singular countable noun and should be preceded by 'a' instead of 'some'.

× When I have my money, then I go to supermarket and buy some T-shirts for me and my.

✓ When I have my money, then I go to the supermarket and buy some T-shirts for me and myself.

The phrase 'for me and my' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used to refer back to the subject 'I' in this context.

× Well, older people in my country often wear T-shirt that feature unique prints inspired by tradition customer.

✓ Well, older people in my country often wear T-shirts that feature unique prints inspired by traditional customers.

The singular 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to agree with 'older people' who wear them. Also, 'tradition customer' is incorrect; it should be 'traditional customers' to correctly describe the prints' inspiration.

× Because of this, they prefer wearing such T-shirts as a way to express their culture and spirituality in identification and they also love to.

✓ Because of this, they prefer wearing such T-shirts as a way to express their culture and spirituality, and they also love to do so.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'do so' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.

× When I was a child, I often wear T-shirt because my mother used to buy them for me and my sister.

✓ When I was a child, I often wore T-shirts because my mother used to buy them for me and my sister.

The verb 'wear' should be in the past tense 'wore' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was a child'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' as referring to multiple items.

× We usually wear wear matching T-shirts to birthday parties and other events which we had a standout and people often notice us as those function.

✓ We usually wear matching T-shirts to birthday parties and other events where we stand out and people often notice us at those functions.

The sentence has repeated 'wear' and incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'Which we had a standout' is incorrect; it should be 'where we stand out'. Also, 'as those function' should be 'at those functions' for correct preposition and plural form.

× I love to wearing T-shirts in my child.

✓ I loved wearing T-shirts in my childhood.

The phrase 'love to wearing' is incorrect; it should be either 'love to wear' or 'love wearing'. Also, 'in my child' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'childhood'. The past tense 'loved' fits better with the past time frame.