T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, instead of 'I want them every day,' say 'I wear them every day.' Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and versatile. They are my go-to clothing for almost any occasion.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, say 'I often buy T-shirts, but I prefer neutral colors like black and gray because they are easy to match with my pants.'

예시: I often buy T-shirts, but I prefer neutral colors like black and gray because they are easy to match with my pants.

제안: Focus on using correct vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Instead of 'comfortness,' say 'comfort.' Also, explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: In my country, older people often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable. They prefer the soft material since it feels good on their skin.

제안: Try to organize your answer more clearly and avoid grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, explain why T-shirts were comfortable and suitable for playing.

예시: As a kid, I wore T-shirts a lot because the humid climate made them comfortable. Also, since we played outside often, the cotton fabric of T-shirts was ideal for staying cool and moving freely.

× I want them every day.

✓ I want to wear them every day.

The sentence lacks the modal verb 'to' after 'want' to indicate the intention to wear T-shirts. The correct form is 'want to wear' rather than just 'want'.

× It's kind of comfortable wearing a T-shirt rather than any other source of clothing it it's A to go dress for me to wear in any occasion.

✓ It's kind of comfortable wearing a T-shirt rather than any other type of clothing; it's an easy-to-go dress for me to wear on any occasion.

The original sentence is confusing and contains run-on errors. 'Source of clothing' is incorrect; 'type of clothing' is appropriate. 'A to go dress' should be 'an easy-to-go dress'. Also, 'in any occasion' should be 'on any occasion'. Proper punctuation and word choice improve clarity.

× Yes, I do often buy T-shirts, but I stick to neutral colors like blacks and Grays as it is easy for me to match them with my pants.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts, but I stick to neutral colors like black and gray as it is easy for me to match them with my pants.

Colors like 'black' and 'gray' are uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'blacks' and 'Grays'. Also, 'do often buy' is better as 'often buy' for natural phrasing.

× In my country, older people are often seen wearing T-shirts because of its comfortness.

✓ In my country, older people are often seen wearing T-shirts because of their comfort.

The pronoun 'its' incorrectly refers to 'T-shirts' which is plural, so 'their' is correct. Also, 'comfortness' is not a standard word; 'comfort' should be used.

× They tend to prefer that because of its material and how their skin feels to that.

✓ They tend to prefer them because of their material and how their skin feels to them.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrect when referring to plural 'T-shirts'; 'them' is appropriate. Also, 'its material' should be 'their material' to agree with plural. The phrase 'how their skin feels to that' is awkward; 'how their skin feels to them' is clearer.

× It's considerable.

✓ It's considerable comfort.

The sentence 'It's considerable.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'comfort' clarifies the meaning.

× As a kid, I Remember Me wearing T-shirts a lot because of the humid climate, T-shirts were more comfortable and as a kid we used to play a lot and cotton materials and observable fabric which is present in T-shirts were more.

✓ As a kid, I remember wearing T-shirts a lot because of the humid climate. T-shirts were more comfortable, and as kids, we used to play a lot. The cotton material and breathable fabric present in T-shirts were better.

'Remember Me wearing' is incorrect; 'remember wearing' is correct. The sentence is run-on and confusing; it needs to be split into clearer sentences. 'Observable fabric' is incorrect; 'breathable fabric' is appropriate. 'Cotton materials' should be 'cotton material' as uncountable. Also, 'were more' is vague; 'were better' clarifies meaning.