T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy, for example, instead of repeating 'I think', you can combine your opinions more effectively.

예시: I wear T-shirts every day because they are cool and comfortable. I prefer bright, plain colours rather than printed ones; for instance, yesterday I wore a bright orange T-shirt which suited me well.

제안: Your answer provides good details but lacks coherence due to some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy such as repeating 'T-shirts' unnecessarily and check for small errors like spacing in '4T shirts'.

예시: Yes, I buy T-shirts quite often because they are easy to wear and very comfortable. For example, last week my husband and I went to Uniqlo and bought five T-shirts in different colours since summer is coming.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons, and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to improve coherence.

예시: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country because they prefer comfortable and cool clothes. Therefore, T-shirts suit all age groups, including the elderly, who value ease of wear.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrases and filler words. Avoid using 'uh' and ensure your sentences are complete and clear. Also, check for word choice errors like 'trap' which seems incorrect here. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast ideas.

예시: Not really; when I was a kid, I mostly wore dresses, especially frocks. However, as I grew up, I started wearing T-shirts more often because they go well with shorts, skirts, or pants.

× My personal preference is T-shirts of bright colours and plain as compared to printed ones.

✓ My personal preference is plain T-shirts of bright colours as compared to printed ones.

The adjective 'plain' should come before the noun 'T-shirts' to correctly describe them. The original sentence incorrectly places 'plain' after 'colours', which causes confusion. In English, adjectives typically precede the nouns they modify.

× Uh, yesterday I wore a bright orange colour T-shirt and I think it suited me well.

✓ Uh, yesterday I wore a bright orange-coloured T-shirt and I think it suited me well.

The phrase 'bright orange colour T-shirt' is awkward. The correct form is 'bright orange-coloured T-shirt' to describe the colour of the T-shirt. This is a compound adjective describing the T-shirt, so it should be hyphenated and 'colour' should be in adjective form 'coloured'.

× Last week I went with my husband to Uniqlo and we got 5 T-shirts in different colours.

✓ Last week I went with my husband to Uniqlo and we got five T-shirts in different colours.

Numbers from one to nine are generally written in words in formal English. Writing '5' as 'five' is preferred in spoken and written English for clarity and formality.

× I think T-shirts are really easy to wear and they're super comfortable so we can wear T-shirts to any occasion and anywhere.

✓ I think T-shirts are really easy to wear and they're super comfortable so we can wear T-shirts on any occasion and anywhere.

The correct preposition to use with 'occasion' is 'on' rather than 'to'. We say 'on an occasion' to indicate the event or time when something happens.

× Since summer is coming we got 4T shirts.

✓ Since summer is coming, we got 4 T-shirts.

There is a spacing issue between '4' and 'T-shirts'. Also, as before, '4' should be written as 'four' for formality. Corrected sentence: 'Since summer is coming, we got four T-shirts.'

× Uh, T-shirts really suit people of all age groups and especially older people because they prefer, uh, comfortable and cool clothes that, uh, they can stay in all the time.

✓ Uh, T-shirts really suit people of all age groups, especially older people, because they prefer comfortable and cool clothes that they can wear all the time.

The phrase 'clothes that they can stay in' is incorrect. The verb 'stay' is not used with clothes. The correct verb is 'wear'. Also, commas are added for clarity and flow.

× And sometimes older people need help in wearing the clothes as they.

✓ And sometimes older people need help in wearing clothes.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'as they' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'as they' completes the sentence properly.

× I wear T-shirts with a pair of shorts, skirts or pants and I think they go well with the all kinds of trap.

✓ I wear T-shirts with a pair of shorts, skirts, or pants and I think they go well with all kinds of tops.

The word 'trap' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'tops'. Also, a comma is needed before 'or' in a list. 'The all kinds' is incorrect; it should be 'all kinds' without 'the'.