T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and filler words like 'uh'.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts every night before going to bed because they are comfortable and help me relax.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Start with a clear statement, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

예시: I don't often buy T-shirts, but I usually purchase one or two when I go out with my friends each month.

제안: Your answer is good but can be clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the traditional clothes. Also, avoid repeating words like 'try to try to'.

예시: In my opinion, older people nowadays prefer comfortable clothes like T-shirts that express their personality. However, in the past, they mostly wore traditional outfits such as Salvador Kurtis and Manymo.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition and improve grammar.

예시: Yes, I wore T-shirts as a child because my mother told me they were comfortable, and I felt relaxed wearing them.

× Well, I prefer to wear T-shirts on my daily routine at night, night before going on a bed because it feels me comfortable and it is a good for me to uh, wear a T-shirts at night.

✓ Well, I prefer to wear T-shirts in my daily routine at night, the night before going to bed because it makes me feel comfortable and it is good for me to wear T-shirts at night.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'daily routine'; it should be 'in my daily routine'. Also, 'going on a bed' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going to bed'. Additionally, 'feels me comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel comfortable'. The article 'a' before 'T-shirts' is unnecessary because 'T-shirts' is plural.

× Well, I prefer to wear T-shirts on my daily routine at night, night before going on a bed because it feels me comfortable and it is a good for me to uh, wear a T-shirts at night.

✓ Well, I prefer to wear T-shirts in my daily routine at night, the night before going to bed because it makes me feel comfortable and it is good for me to wear T-shirts at night.

The phrase 'a T-shirts' is incorrect because 'T-shirts' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. The correct form is simply 'wear T-shirts'.

× No, I don't usually prefer to purchase T-shirts, but whenever I go outside with my friends I prefer to T-shirt to purchase T-shirts one or twice a month.

✓ No, I don't usually prefer to purchase T-shirts, but whenever I go outside with my friends, I prefer to purchase T-shirts once or twice a month.

The phrase 'prefer to T-shirt to purchase T-shirts' is incorrect and confusing. The modal verb 'prefer to' should be followed by the base verb 'purchase'. Also, 'one or twice a month' should be 'once or twice a month' for correct quantifier usage.

× Well, according to my perspective, nowadays people prefer to purchase those outfits through which they feel comfortable and develop their personality.

✓ Well, from my perspective, nowadays people prefer to purchase those outfits with which they feel comfortable and that help develop their personality.

The phrase 'according to my perspective' is not idiomatic; 'from my perspective' is correct. Also, 'through which they feel comfortable' is incorrect; 'with which they feel comfortable' is appropriate. Additionally, 'and develop their personality' needs a relative pronoun 'that' to connect properly.

× But if I talk about a past or people always try to try to follow traditional customs such as Salvador Kurtis and Manymo.

✓ But if I talk about the past, people always tried to follow traditional customs such as Salvador Kurtis and Manymo.

The phrase 'a past' is incorrect; it should be 'the past'. Also, 'people always try to try to follow' is repetitive and inconsistent in tense; it should be 'people always tried to follow' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, definitely. To be honest, I apparently remember when I was a child that I, uh, since I was uh, wearing T-shirts, uh, because uh, I prefer my mother, uh, tells me that I love, I feel I felt comfortable and more relaxed when I was wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yes, definitely. To be honest, I clearly remember when I was a child that I used to wear T-shirts because my mother told me that I loved them and I felt comfortable and more relaxed when I was wearing T-shirts.

The sentence has multiple tense inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. 'Since I was wearing' is incorrect; 'I used to wear' is appropriate for past habitual action. 'I prefer my mother tells me' is incorrect; it should be 'my mother told me'. 'I love, I feel I felt' is confusing; 'I loved' and 'I felt' are correct past tense forms. Also, 'wearing T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'.