T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: I wear T-shirts almost every day, both at home and when I go to the market or university because they are very comfortable and fashionable for daily wear.

제안: Your answer is somewhat understandable but lacks clarity and proper sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your buying habits with specific details, using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I don't buy T-shirts very often. Usually, I purchase new ones only when my old T-shirts are worn out. At that time, I choose to buy from either the local market or online shops.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: In my country, older people usually prefer comfortable and simple T-shirts rather than fashionable ones. They tend to choose practicality over style when buying clothes.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear and direct response with supporting details. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases and use proper sentence structure.

예시: Yes, my parents always bought T-shirts for me when I was a kid because they are very comfortable to wear. I especially liked wearing them during playtime.

× I always saw dessert in home and also outside when I'm going in market, also my university, that's time I wear T-shirt because T-shirt is so much comfortable for wire and also it's, uh, fashionable parts in our daily life.

✓ I always see T-shirts at home and also outside when I go to the market, also at my university. At those times, I wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable to wear and also they are fashionable parts of our daily life.

The student incorrectly used the past tense 'saw' instead of the present tense 'see' to describe habitual actions. Also, 'dessert' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts'. The phrase 'when I'm going in market' should be 'when I go to the market' to use the simple present tense for habitual actions and correct preposition. 'Wire' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'wear'. The sentence structure was confusing and needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× I always saw dessert in home and also outside when I'm going in market, also my university, that's time I wear T-shirt because T-shirt is so much comfortable for wire and also it's, uh, fashionable parts in our daily life.

✓ I always see T-shirts at home and also outside when I go to the market, also at my university. At those times, I wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable to wear and also they are fashionable parts of our daily life.

The student used 'dessert' instead of 'T-shirts' and 'T-shirt' instead of 'T-shirts' when referring to multiple items. Plural forms are needed when talking about more than one item. Also, 'it's fashionable parts' is incorrect because 'parts' is plural and should be matched with 'they are' instead of 'it's'.

× I always saw dessert in home and also outside when I'm going in market, also my university, that's time I wear T-shirt because T-shirt is so much comfortable for wire and also it's, uh, fashionable parts in our daily life.

✓ I always see T-shirts at home and also outside when I go to the market, also at my university. At those times, I wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable to wear and also they are fashionable parts of our daily life.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'home' and 'market'. The correct prepositions are 'at home' and 'to the market'. Also, 'for wire' should be 'to wear'.

× Actually not. I do not often buy T-shirt uh, when I want it. When my umm, old T-shirt are destroyed. The time I decided to buy T-shirt from local market or some online shop, that time I choose it.

✓ Actually, no. I do not often buy T-shirts. I buy them when I want them or when my old T-shirts are destroyed. At that time, I decide to buy T-shirts from the local market or some online shop; then I choose them.

The student used 'T-shirt' in singular form when referring to multiple items. Also, 'old T-shirt are' is incorrect; it should be 'old T-shirts are' to agree in number. Consistent plural forms are necessary when talking about more than one item.

× Actually not. I do not often buy T-shirt uh, when I want it. When my umm, old T-shirt are destroyed. The time I decided to buy T-shirt from local market or some online shop, that time I choose it.

✓ Actually, no. I do not often buy T-shirts. I buy them when I want them or when my old T-shirts are destroyed. At that time, I decide to buy T-shirts from the local market or some online shop; then I choose them.

The student mixed past tense 'decided' with present tense context. Since the question is about habitual action, present tense 'decide' and 'choose' should be used. Also, sentence fragments like 'When my old T-shirts are destroyed.' should be connected properly.

× Actually there are not many fashionable T-shirt for older people. Older people always uh, purchase uh, the normal ones or what? Make them comfortable then not like fashionable T-shirt or something. And uh, they always uh, prefer.

✓ Actually, there are not many fashionable T-shirts for older people. Older people always purchase the normal ones that make them comfortable rather than fashionable T-shirts or something. And they always prefer those.

The student used 'T-shirt' in singular form when referring to multiple items. Plural 'T-shirts' is needed. Also, the sentence was incomplete and unclear; it was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes my mother and father always purchase a T-shirt for me when I was kid because T-shirt is so much comfortable to wear and the time uh when I was skied especially the time I destroy all clocks and T-shirt are so much.

✓ Yes, my mother and father always purchased a T-shirt for me when I was a kid because T-shirts are very comfortable to wear. Especially when I was a kid, I wore T-shirts a lot.

The student used present tense 'purchase' instead of past tense 'purchased' to describe past habitual actions. 'When I was kid' is missing the article 'a'. The phrase 'when I was skied' is incorrect and unclear; it was corrected to 'when I was a kid'. The sentence 'I destroy all clocks and T-shirt are so much' is unclear and was omitted for clarity.