T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, 'going for gym' should be 'going to the gym', and 'color' should be plural 'colours'. Also, the phrase 'choose one or one for any' is unclear and redundant. Try to use more precise and natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and versatile. They suit casual occasions like going to the gym or meeting friends. Additionally, I have a large collection of T-shirts in different designs and colours, which allows me to pick one for any occasion.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes specific details, which is good. However, there are minor errors such as 'a dozen of T-shirts' should be 'a dozen T-shirts', and 'as gift' should be 'as gifts'. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'For example' instead of 'For instance'.

예시: Yes, I usually buy T-shirts about once a week because I wear them almost every day, especially when I'm hanging out with friends or attending casual meetings. For example, two weeks ago I bought a dozen T-shirts and gave three of them as gifts to my friends. This way, I always have enough comfortable clothes.

제안: Your answer is well-structured and relevant with good supporting details. To improve, you could use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. For instance, use 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to connect ideas. Also, 'smart looking' could be replaced with 'smart-looking' or 'stylish'.

예시: I believe T-shirts are quite fashionable and practical for older people in my country. Moreover, my grandfather often wears T-shirts when he goes out because he finds them both comfortable and smart-looking. In addition, many elderly people prefer T-shirts as they are easy to wear and suit casual occasions well.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes reasons, which is good. However, the sentence structure is a bit long and could be clearer. Also, 'they say' is vague; it would be better to say 'because they believed'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy such as 'easy to wear as a child' and 'easy to wash as well' in the same sentence.

예시: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child because my parents believed they were easy to wear and wash. Also, even as an adult, I still love wearing T-shirts because of their comfort and simplicity.

× They are perfect for casual outfits and many daily activities such as going for gym or hanging out with friends.

✓ They are perfect for casual outfits and many daily activities such as going to the gym or hanging out with friends.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect when referring to attending the gym. The correct preposition is 'to' as in 'going to the gym'. Using 'for' in this context is a common error. To improve, remember that 'go to' is used with places or activities like 'the gym'. Thus, 'going to the gym' is correct.

× Moreover, I have extensive collection of T-shirts in different designs and color which allow me to choose one or one for any.

✓ Moreover, I have an extensive collection of T-shirts in different designs and colours which allow me to choose one for any occasion.

The noun 'collection' is singular and requires the article 'an' before it. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colours' to match 'different designs'. The phrase 'choose one or one for any' is unclear and likely a mistake; it is corrected to 'choose one for any occasion' for clarity. To improve, ensure singular countable nouns have appropriate articles and plural forms are used when referring to multiple items.

× For instance, 2 weeks ago I bought a dozen of T-shirts and I gave three of them as gift to my friends.

✓ For instance, 2 weeks ago I bought a dozen T-shirts and I gave three of them as gifts to my friends.

The phrase 'a dozen of T-shirts' is incorrect; 'dozen' as a quantifier does not require 'of' before the noun. Also, 'as gift' should be plural 'as gifts' because multiple items were given. To improve, remember that 'a dozen' is directly followed by the plural noun without 'of', and use plural 'gifts' when referring to multiple presents.

× I gave three of them as gift to my friends.

✓ I gave three of them as gifts to my friends.

The phrase 'as gift' is incorrect because 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' when referring to multiple items given. Also, the preposition 'to' is correctly used here. To improve, use plural forms when referring to multiple items.

× For instance, even as an adult I still love to wear T-shirts.

✓ For instance, even as an adult, I still love wearing T-shirts.

The phrase 'love to wear' is grammatically correct but 'love wearing' is more natural and idiomatic in this context. Adding a comma after 'adult' improves readability. To improve, consider using gerund forms after verbs like 'love' for smoother expression.