T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 중복되는 표현이 많으며 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 문장을 명확하게 끝맺고, 불필요한 'umm'과 같은 말버릇을 줄이세요. 또한, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 더 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are simple and comfortable. For example, I especially like white T-shirts since they match well with blue jeans and many other outfits.

제안: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적으로도 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 반복과 말더듬을 줄이세요. 또한, 구체적인 구매 빈도와 이유를 명확히 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I don't buy T-shirts very often. Usually, I buy a few at once and then wait until I need more.

제안: 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않고 문장이 어색하며 반복이 많습니다. 질문에 바로 답하는 문장으로 시작하고, 구체적인 예시나 의견을 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

예시: Older people in my country often wear T-shirts as part of their casual outfits. They choose fashionable designs to express their style comfortably.

제안: 과거 시제 사용이 부적절하고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 문장을 명확한 과거 시제로 바꾸고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I usually wore T-shirts when I was a kid because I had to do many outdoor activities at primary school. T-shirts were simple and comfortable for playing outside.

× Especially I like white T-shirts because they go well with umm rats of outfits such as blue jeans which I.

✓ Especially I like white T-shirts because they go well with lots of outfits such as blue jeans.

The word 'rats' is incorrect and should be 'lots' to indicate a large number of outfits. This is a plural quantifier issue, so it falls under singular and plural issues.

× Umm, I buy T-shirts, but, but not quite often. Uh, I usually, I usually buy umm, poor T-shirts for T-shirts at once and I wait for when I need.

✓ Umm, I buy T-shirts, but not quite often. Uh, I usually buy a few T-shirts at once and wait until I need more.

The phrase 'poor T-shirts for T-shirts' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'a few T-shirts' to indicate a small quantity. This is a quantifier and plural issue.

× I think it's three question is hard to make an answer, but as far as I know these days all the people makes their makes their outfit very passionable through T-shirts.

✓ I think this question is hard to answer, but as far as I know these days all people make their outfits very fashionable through T-shirts.

The phrase 'all the people makes their makes their outfit' has plural and verb agreement errors. 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'outfit' should be plural 'outfits'. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement issue.

× I think it's three question is hard to make an answer, but as far as I know these days all the people makes their makes their outfit very passionable through T-shirts.

✓ I think this question is hard to answer, but as far as I know these days all people make their outfits very fashionable through T-shirts.

The word 'passionable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fashionable'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× Yes, umm, right now I look back on my childhood, I usually wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, umm, right now I look back on my childhood, I usually wore T-shirts.

When referring to past habits, the past tense 'wore' should be used instead of the present tense 'wear'. This is a past tense issue.

× So I need, I needed the simple and good poor activity.

✓ So I needed simple and good clothes for outdoor activities.

The sentence is unclear and uses 'poor activity' incorrectly. It should be 'clothes for outdoor activities'. Also, 'needed' is correct past tense. This is a past tense issue and incorrect word choice.