T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors, and some unclear words like "salt" and "polity shirt". Try to use correct and clear vocabulary, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say "I usually wear T-shirts daily because they are more comfortable than sweatshirts or other clothes. However, when I need to be formal, I prefer wearing a shirt, especially in cold weather."

예시: I usually wear T-shirts every day because they are more comfortable than sweatshirts or other types of clothing. However, when I need to dress formally, I prefer wearing a shirt, especially during cold weather.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect words like "weigh teaser" and "dessert" instead of "wear T-shirts". Please use correct vocabulary and clear sentence structure. Also, try to give a direct answer first, then add details with linking words. For example, "Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I like to have a variety of colors and styles. I usually buy one every two or three months."

예시: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I like to have a variety of colors and unique styles. Therefore, I usually purchase one every two or three months.

제안: Your answer contains many unclear words and grammar mistakes, such as "wearing teeth" and "wearing teaser". Please use correct vocabulary and organize your answer logically with linking words. For example, "Older people in my country usually do not wear T-shirts. Instead, they prefer traditional local clothes. Therefore, T-shirts are not considered fashionable among older people."

예시: Older people in my country usually do not wear T-shirts. Instead, they prefer traditional local clothes. Therefore, T-shirts are not considered fashionable among older people.

제안: Your answer has many unclear words and grammar errors, such as "dessert" instead of "T-shirts", "silent" instead of "young", and "buy meat" instead of "buy me". Please use correct vocabulary and clear sentence structure. Also, try to give a direct answer first, then add supporting details with linking words. For example, "Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was a child and have continued to wear them throughout my life. My mother found T-shirts easy and convenient to dress me in, so she often bought them."

예시: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was a child and have continued to wear them throughout my life. My mother found T-shirts easy and convenient to dress me in, so she often bought them.

× I usually wear T-shirt on a daily basis.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts on a daily basis.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the sentence talks about wearing them regularly, implying more than one or in general. In English, when referring to items in general, the plural form is used.

× I found this more comfortable as compared to the others like sweatshirt and salt.

✓ I find this more comfortable compared to others like sweatshirts and socks.

The sentence uses 'found' which is past tense but the context is general preference, so present tense 'find' is appropriate. Also, 'the others' should be 'others' without 'the' when comparing general items. 'Sweatshirt' and 'salt' are singular and incorrect; they should be plural and 'salt' is likely a mishearing of 'sock' or 'socks'.

× Even if I have to be formal, I prefer wearing a polity shirt to set in cold.

✓ Even if I have to be formal, I prefer wearing a polo shirt to stay warm in the cold.

'Polity shirt' is incorrect; the correct term is 'polo shirt'. 'To set in cold' is incorrect; it should be 'to stay warm in the cold'. The sentence needs correction for word choice and clarity.

× Since I always weigh teaser, I need to be is a bit very versatile about the different kind of dessert with colors and their unique style, so I like to buy it frequently or maybe one in two or three months.

✓ Since I always wear T-shirts, I need to be a bit versatile about the different kinds of designs with colors and their unique styles, so I like to buy them frequently, maybe once every two or three months.

'Weigh teaser' is a mishearing of 'wear T-shirts'. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' because it refers to multiple types. 'Dessert' is incorrect; it should be 'designs'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural T-shirts. The sentence also needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× Well, the older people do not have the habit of wearing teeth.

✓ Well, older people do not have the habit of wearing T-shirts.

'Wearing teeth' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing T-shirts'. Also, 'the older people' can be simplified to 'older people' for natural English.

× So, uh, I believe there has not be such a truth in way in the, uh, way of wearing teaser that's fashionable for old older people.

✓ So, I believe there has not been such a trend in the way of wearing T-shirts that's fashionable for older people.

'There has not be' is incorrect; the correct form is 'there has not been'. 'Truth in way' is incorrect; it should be 'trend in the way'. 'Teaser' should be 'T-shirts'. 'Old older people' is redundant; 'older people' suffices.

× Yeah, I used to wear dessert when I was silent and I have been wearing desserts throughout my life.

✓ Yeah, I used to wear T-shirts when I was a child and I have been wearing T-shirts throughout my life.

'Dessert' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts'. 'Silent' is incorrect; it should be 'a child'. The sentence needs correction for word choice and clarity.

× It's uh, it is because, uh, my, my mother even find easy and convenient to put me on T-shirt.

✓ It's because my mother even found it easy and convenient to put me in T-shirts.

'Find' should be past tense 'found' to match the past context. 'Put me on T-shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'put me in T-shirts'. The sentence needs correction for verb tense and preposition use.

× So I believe she used to, uh, buy meat a lot.

✓ So I believe she used to buy me a lot of T-shirts.

'Buy meat' is incorrect; it should be 'buy me a lot of T-shirts'. The sentence needs correction for word choice and clarity.