T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and give one or two specific details with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. For example, use present simple and correct phrases (e.g. "in my wardrobe").

예시: I usually wear T‑shirts in the summer because they are comfortable and lightweight. For example, I wear a white T‑shirt on very hot days and darker colours when it’s slightly cooler.

제안: Give a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons and linkers. Correct word choice (e.g. "clothing stores", "cheaper than long‑sleeved shirts") and avoid choppy sentences. Aim for 2–3 coherent sentences.

예시: Yes, I buy them quite often because they are widely available in clothing stores and usually cheaper than long‑sleeved shirts. Also, I like the variety of designs, so I can choose different styles for different occasions.

제안: Start with a clear statement about trend, use correct tense and subject agreement, and give a specific example with appropriate linking words. Avoid grammar mistakes (e.g. "they find", "can be worn") and keep it concise.

예시: T‑shirts are becoming more popular among older people because they are inexpensive and very versatile. For example, many wear them with trousers or a light jacket for casual outings.

제안: Answer directly about the past using past tense, be specific and coherent. Correct confusing phrases ("we had uniforms and they were not allowed at school" unclear). Use linking words to compare past and present if needed, and avoid mixing tenses.

예시: Yes, I often wore T‑shirts as a child, especially on weekends and during holidays because we had to wear uniforms at school. Now, I still wear T‑shirts for casual activities, usually with shorts or jeans.

× I usually wear them during summer times as they are pretty prominent and my wardrobe.

✓ I usually wear them during the summer because they are very common in my wardrobe.

The phrase 'summer times' is incorrect; use 'the summer' (definite article with seasons) and 'prominent' is the wrong adjective for clothing frequency—'common' or 'popular' fits. Also 'and my wardrobe' is ungrammatical; 'in my wardrobe' is correct. Use present simple 'I usually wear' is correct, so keep tense. ID:6

× I will wear the white 1 during hot days and the darker ones for the cooler weather.

✓ I wear white ones during hot days and darker ones in cooler weather.

'The white 1' is incorrect: use 'white ones' to refer to white T-shirts; avoid digit '1'. 'I will wear' shifts to future unnecessarily; present simple 'I wear' or 'I usually wear' matches habitual context. Use 'in cooler weather' for correct preposition. Use article 'the' only when specific. ID:22

× Yes, because they are really common in the clothes shop and usually the cheapest type of clothes, especially compared to cold or long sleeves.

✓ Yes, because they are really common in clothing shops and are usually the cheapest type of clothing, especially compared to coats or long-sleeved garments.

'in the clothes shop' is okay but 'clothing shops' is more natural; 'cheapest type of clothes' should be 'cheapest type of clothing' (uncountable). 'compared to cold or long sleeves' is incorrect: likely 'coats or long sleeves' is intended; use 'long-sleeved garments' or 'long-sleeved shirts'. Also add 'are' for verb completeness. ID:11

× And they can have various types of design.

✓ And they can have various designs.

'Various types of design' is wordy; 'various designs' is concise and natural. No article needed. This is an adjective/noun collocation correction. ID:22

× It's becoming increasingly popular because they found T-shirts to be inexpensive and versatile.

✓ They are becoming increasingly popular because people find T-shirts inexpensive and versatile.

Mismatch between 'It's' (singular) and 'they' (plural). Also 'found' (past) mismatches present context; use present 'find'. Clarify subject: 'people' or 'T-shirts' — here 'T-shirts are becoming...' or 'They are becoming...' Use consistent plurality and tense. ID:27

× For example, it can be wear along with shirts or pants for casual outing.

✓ For example, they can be worn with shirts or pants for casual outings.

Passive requires past participle 'worn' after 'be'. 'It' is singular but refers to plural 'T-shirts', so use 'they'. Use 'with' not 'along with' for simplicity and 'casual outings' plural. This fixes verb form and agreement. ID:8},{

× Yes, usually during the holidays or weekends because at our school we have the uniforms and they are not teachers.

✓ Yes, usually during holidays or on weekends because at our school we have uniforms and there are no teachers' uniforms.

The original sentence is confusing. 'the holidays or weekends' -> 'holidays or on weekends'; 'the uniforms and they are not teachers' is unclear. Likely meant to say the school has uniforms and they are not for teachers. If intent was different, clarify. Use 'there are no' or 'they are not for teachers' and maintain present simple tense. ID:6

× For example, I will wear it along with pants or shorts when going now.

✓ For example, I would wear it with pants or shorts when going out now.

'I will wear' suggests future but context refers to past habit as a child; use 'I used to wear' or 'I would wear'. Also 'it' should be 'them' for plural T-shirts. 'When going now' is ungrammatical; use 'when going out' or 'now' depending on intended meaning. Maintain consistent tense and correct pronoun. ID:7